Open Poetry #20 |
Commit |
bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Commit a person comes along not knowing where the future will take them but to commit to each other hand in hand sorrow in sorrow then the moment arrives where the commit has stopped not knowing when and where to go but after a moving to the future hoping the commit will again arrive. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
||
© Copyright 2002 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved | |||
my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Hi Bernie! This "commit" thing...sounds like something you catch! I suppose it actually IS something you catch! I liked this write! ~Sydney McLean |
||
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like the message Bernie! It sems that a committment for the long run is one of the hardest to maintain. However, I have never been able to associate committment with love. Committment seems to be such a cold unfeeling word. I've always believed that true committment would automatically develop from true love and would appear without saying. This is a great write! Thanks for the thoughts! |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |