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Open Poetry #20

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bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2002-05-31 06:47 AM

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a person comes along
not knowing where
the future will take them
but to commit
to each other
hand in hand
sorrow in sorrow
then the moment arrives
where the commit
has stopped
not knowing when
and where to go
but after a moving
to the future
hoping the commit
will again arrive.

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

my3monkeytoes
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since 2002-05-11

Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze

1 posted 2002-05-31 06:54 AM

Hi Bernie!

This "commit" thing...sounds like something you catch! I suppose it actually IS something you catch! I liked this write!

~Sydney McLean

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-05-31 07:03 AM

I like the message Bernie!
It sems that a committment for the long run is one of the hardest to maintain.
However, I have never been able to associate committment with love.
Committment seems to be such a cold unfeeling word.
I've always believed that true committment would automatically develop from true love and would appear without saying.
This is a great write! Thanks for the thoughts!

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