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a black soul's prying
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a black soul's prying |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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lying crying deep into a black heart scrying frying sighing seep into a sack cloth trying jump through hoops with shackled feet sing the blues and keep the beat break a finger you take a hand tell me it is understand...it's lying crying deep into a lack soul trying frying sighing planets all are misaligning... jump through squares in shapen peg take my cares my mislead the agony of me, beating heart renege the death of me.... dying trying sink into a black hole's flying... buying dying drink a drought of black soul's prying... an emptiness devoid in space-- a black soul prying leaves no trace... [This message has been edited by serenity (05-31-2002 03:36 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This reminds me of a poem I wrote about Monapoly....you may go past Jail and move ahead to park avenue (of all places)!!! Don't ask me why!! Must have been your game board!  The pegs and the hoops and who's keeping score!!! Nice poem serenity~[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (05-31-2002 03:48 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I liked the flow and I could follow, even in the darkness Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
jump through hoops with shackled feet sing the blues and keep the beat break a finger you take a hand tell me it is understand...it's =========================== well I know where this is coming from... and what can I say to this???? besides I know... heart-hugs KA Cant stand up for fallin apart |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's amazing what you'll find back here in the darkness. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have no idea what you're writing about but I love every word of it anyway....I think that kind of ramble is beautiful........But Lord girl what's "scrying"? I do know a little about that blues part............ When you write like this you're a little black jewell! Celeste, guests guess less best expressed! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome - scrying - to practice crystal gazing.... Serene One...good stuff! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You mean as in "crystal ball" Karilea? Well, that's the first time I've heard it called that! I got so much to learn and oh so little time! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're a young pup, Ethome...still lots of time to learn everything you've a mind to.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I frankly confess that this is a drunken mess...but I do thank you for the generosity...you are all too kind to me! and I love ya for that!  |
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