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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I felt the door close, shut softly my heart, the door of my torn heart I felt the word flowing over me A black shroud of foreverness The tear of torn tissue, rended A shudder of life’s soul dying Loneliness consuming, arrives Life, the great hole of lost goodbyes |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
"...Life, the great hole of lost goodbyes..." Moving my friend ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy and again you speak the words that every soul remembers, the lost and torn feelings that seem to rip you from your place in the sun and toss you un-cared for into the depths of despair. The amazing this is you can speak to me even when the very thought of such a feeling is alien to me. Only a true writer can speak to a soul that dances in loves light of the pain that is but a distant memory. I love this utterly utterly and this of course you know.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a bounce from stickybuns...moods are like that, y'know? Bouncing back and forth and such... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Magnus: You must have wandered down into the canyon of separation and returned with this sad affinity for the perils of open hearted giving. I really enjoyed the read! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Life, the great hole of lost goodbyes" Love the soft yet powerful punch behind this Barry. Good morning read.. Sometimes less is more. ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry "Life, the great hole of lost goodbyes" Yes, that...and so much more. Enjoyed this! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hey Maggie...yanno?...I had one about "You know that you just sorta, stomped on my aorta....ya think I should post it?.... [This message has been edited by Toerag (05-31-2002 11:16 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
After reading your ode to Karilea once again (and backing off from comments that would have gotten me into much trouble *G*) I wasn't expecting this painful purge. *S* But it's very well written. *S* G'head, Toe... just remember that your stomped on aorta has suthern comfort waiting. *G* |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Nothing hurts worse than lost goodbyes...~~sigh~~ Written from the heart, the pain felt... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx every one for your replies...and... Toe....I kinda like that title...Wouldn't that be a really good one.... Where are the sticky buns? I'm hungry!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey Barry what is up with these sad poems? Don't start sounding like me, now!! I love it, of course. Sandra |
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