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In the Footsteps of a Breeze
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In the Footsteps of a Breeze |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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the breeze left footprints across the sand like a trail of fine lace it tip-toed over grass dotted dunes swirled through beach plums and came to rest in my ears like a forgotten memory whispering of stolen, star-lit kisses and slow dances on a moon-lit floor murmuring of far-off dreams and an angel's sigh the breeze moved on like an impatient child to lift and frolic among the clouds leaving me earthbound swept up in the footprints of a breeze though in my heart I soared too aloft in crystal skies A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life to be thankful for a good one. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the breeze left footprints across the sand like a trail of fine lace it tip-toed over grass dotted dunes swirled through beach plums and came to rest in my ears like a forgotten memory whispering of stolen, star-lit kisses and slow dances on a moon-lit floor =========================== who could forget the way you write imagery.. this is lovely and softly sensual like a summer breeze on bare skin... so good to read you again  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully poetic images........nicely expressed. I know that feeling when a breeze seems to swoop down and consume you for a few moments....it's actually very refreshing like your poem here! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I'm absolutely thrilled to see post! And with an awesome poem too! (As always!) |
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Little_White_Flowers Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 23 |
Beautiful poem.reaches out to me more ways then one. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Boy do I miss your poetry - Almost as much as I miss you...  Check your email, OK? If your address has changed or anything silly like that, please contact me ASAP... I gotsta TALK to you...  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
beautifully done my friend... jwesley |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Hey all! Thanks! I know it's been a long time, yes I am still alive, well, happy, etc etc etc. I started writing again, but it's all blabber for now...so I reposted this oldie to get me in the mood to write better stuff. You have a reply to your email nan my love! *hugs & kisses all* H PS thanks for your sweet replies! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's so nice to read you again. Are you taking requests for posts of your other 'oldies' but goodies? We have a lot of newbies here that should get a dose of the X Angel.... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is simply breathtaking sweetie, thanks for sharing ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
this is beautiful, with soem amazing lines... i love "footprints in a breeze" esclandre Je le Rêve, je Pleure |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice to meet you, heather. I love the imagery in this, and hope to see more of your poetry. BTW, is that a Quarter Horse? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
xoxoxoxoxoxangel! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
yes I'll take requests for oldies  and yes that is an AQHA buttermilk buckskin foundation bred mare glad to be home! love yasssssssssssssssssssss |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
GIRLIE!  You're back - and have been miiissseed! It's so good to read you again. Keep it up! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So wonderful to see you..and read your poetry! More! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Heather... So nice to meet you! I loved this piece... as gentle as a summer breeze. I do hope you post more...Soon!! even if they are reposts... Lots of us here haven't seen them! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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