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Janette
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0 posted 2002-05-30 03:42 PM


Time

he
did not make time for
her

she
made lots of time for
him

they
rarely shared their time
together

watch
them grieve for lost time
alone

Janette

© Copyright 2002 Janette - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2002-05-30 03:57 PM


have you been peeking in my windows?
so much lost...so much said in so few well chosen words. Nice to read you fellow Jan.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-30 04:00 PM


I won't tell you how many times this has happened to me...James
ethome
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3 posted 2002-05-30 04:04 PM


Sadly that's the way those types of situations end up. A simple but impressive description!
Sven
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4 posted 2002-05-30 04:48 PM


you know, this says more than I could imagine. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-05-30 04:50 PM


Sad, isn't it?
Well done

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2002-05-30 05:19 PM


janette
seems that time is
a thorn in everyone
sometime

cool write ms

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2002-05-30 06:40 PM


Janette, this speaks to me. I'm sure you know why.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-05-30 07:13 PM


Time is all too often lost for one reason or another. This was a wonderful peice,I know how that must feel If its whats going on right now I pray that time comes together.
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9 posted 2002-05-30 07:18 PM


liked it
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