Open Poetry #20 |
Time |
Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Time he did not make time for her she made lots of time for him they rarely shared their time together watch them grieve for lost time alone Janette |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
have you been peeking in my windows? so much lost...so much said in so few well chosen words. Nice to read you fellow Jan. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I won't tell you how many times this has happened to me...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sadly that's the way those types of situations end up. A simple but impressive description! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know, this says more than I could imagine. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sad, isn't it? Well done Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
janette seems that time is a thorn in everyone sometime cool write ms |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Janette, this speaks to me. I'm sure you know why. Sandra |
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Little_White_Flowers Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 23 |
Time is all too often lost for one reason or another. This was a wonderful peice,I know how that must feel If its whats going on right now I pray that time comes together. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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