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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-05-30 03:42 PM



Sky Painting

You set me free to sing my song
The words ringing loud and strong
Notes filling the air with such glee
Flying high and flying free
No hiding from others who fly
Dancing steps across the sky
My feet dipping in rainbow hue
I paint the words I love you

You set me free to paint the sky
Looping the loop free to fly
And I on wings of soaring soul
Call you forth to make me whole
I will show you how I am free
Come up here and fly with me
I’ll bedew myself with starlight
I’ll soar high throughout the night

You set me free and I thank you
Now come enjoy this too
I’ll ease you into heated fire
Raise you up on pure desire
Make you scream that’s quite enough
I’ll clothe you in a cloud’s white fluff
You’ll beg me to start once again
I’ll re-ignite passions flame

Marsha


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 2002-05-30 03:43 PM


Nicely done sweet one....you are obviously a real romantic....
Muys
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2 posted 2002-05-30 04:17 PM




And I my dear
I love you too.
Big hug
Muys

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3 posted 2002-05-30 04:41 PM


Whew!  It suddenly got very hot in here!
What a piece magnificent, mushy (no longer) Marsha!

peppermint35
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4 posted 2002-05-30 10:47 PM


Dear Marsha, sweetness.. what can I say to this except ... WOW!!!!

You have outdone yourself, honey... this one lights up the sky!!!

Your admiring, Pepper

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

ethome
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5 posted 2002-05-30 10:49 PM


Marvelous images Mushy! You are growing so much and it's a pleasure to read this work!
Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-05-30 10:50 PM



Toe, I do believe Marsha was born about 100 years too late...she belongs in the time of pure romanticism, and STILL her laughter would ring through the centuries...

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-05-30 10:53 PM


You set me free to paint the sky
Looping the loop free to fly

I can just picture you doing this, Marsha...

I hope you have a parachute with you....
The poem is an absolute beauty...

~ paintbrushes full of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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