Open Poetry #20 |
Tribute to the closeing of ground 0 |
Mystic Mystron Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 69North York .Ontario |
We rose not just a country, but a world We cried not alone, but together We ralied in strenght as one We cannot be broken, for we are one world We will never forget the ones lost, We will never forget the love and strenght of a world We will never forget the strenght of a nation, a counrty the world They will never shake us any one They made a nation a world stronger They made us not just a nation under God They made us a WORLD under God. You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words. You are a great poet when those same words touch your heart first. [This message has been edited by Mystic Mystron (05-30-2002 11:51 AM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Magnificent....a wonderful tribute....I love it...very emotional... |
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Mystic Mystron Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 69North York .Ontario |
this one has been in my mind for a long time now. the closeing of ground 0 helped a little i am still gonna work on it more for there is more i would like to say. God Bless all Your friend from Ontario Canada |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome! I always like to welcome a fellow Canuck!! Nice write! I enjoyed the read. |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
"They made us not just a nation under God They made us a WORLD under God." So true!!! I encourage you to work on this poem, for as you indicated there is much more to say, and the stronger we all stay in our faith, the less can anything hold us in fear. You can help us do that. Love and hugs, Mom Street |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wilfred my friend and fellow prestidigitator! This is a wonderful tribute to the closing.. I watched as many many others did today.. And the memories and tears flooded back. I appreciate this piece much. Very well done. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
A very poignant post. Not only was today, Memorial day (observed on Monday) but it was also National day of Prayer. What could suit this better than the dedication above. Love, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, yes, no evil can ever tear our spirit of love and liberty apart, for we are always together and we will always stand under the colors of freedom! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel of words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wilfred, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful, beautiful tribute and so true, my hand extends across to you ~HUGS~ god bless America and all her friends across the world, love from an Aussie who cares deeply floating winged ~HUGS~ your way Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
isnt it so funny how time and time again america gets off it's big lazy ass to go out there and make a difference? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for the wonderful picture, and the thoughts and messages of the poem. I have always considered myself a world citizen. the internet has brought us closer together, and so has this tragic event. Now, if we can really find a way to live peacefully, as one people on this planet, perhaps we just might survive as a species. |
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