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Mystic Mystron
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0 posted 2002-05-30 11:13 AM


  
We rose not just a country, but a world
We cried not alone, but together
We ralied in strenght as one
We cannot be broken, for we are one world
We will never forget the ones lost,
We will never forget the love and strenght of a world
We will never forget the strenght of a nation, a counrty the world
They will never shake us any one
They made a nation a world stronger
They made us not just a nation under God
They made us a WORLD under God.





You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words.
You are a great poet when those same words touch your heart first.



[This message has been edited by Mystic Mystron (05-30-2002 11:51 AM).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2002-05-30 11:17 AM


Magnificent....a wonderful tribute....I love it...very emotional...

Mystic Mystron
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2 posted 2002-05-30 11:19 AM


this one has been in my mind for a long time now. the closeing of ground 0 helped a little
i am still gonna work on it more for there is more i would like to say.  

God Bless all

Your friend from Ontario Canada

ethome
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3 posted 2002-05-30 11:39 AM


Welcome! I always like to welcome a fellow Canuck!!  
Nice write!
I enjoyed the read.

alterego
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since 2002-02-23
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4 posted 2002-05-30 12:30 PM


"They made us not just a nation under God
They made us a WORLD under God."

So true!!!

I encourage you to work on this poem, for as you indicated there is much more to say, and the stronger we all stay in our faith, the less can anything hold us in fear.

You can help us do that.

Love and hugs,

Mom Street


Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-05-30 12:39 PM


Wilfred my friend and fellow prestidigitator!
This is a wonderful tribute to the closing..
I watched as many many others did today..
And the memories and tears flooded back.
I appreciate this piece much.
Very well done.
~Hugs, Nancy~

Magicmystery
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6 posted 2002-05-30 11:46 PM


A very poignant post.  Not only was today, Memorial day (observed on Monday) but it was also National day of Prayer.  What could suit this better than the dedication above.  

Love, Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-05-30 11:51 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, yes, no evil can ever tear our spirit of love and liberty apart, for we are always together and we will always stand under the colors of freedom! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel of words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wilfred, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

tracie66
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8 posted 2002-05-31 02:12 AM


Wonderful, beautiful tribute and so true, my hand extends across to you
~HUGS~
god bless America and all her friends across the world, love from an Aussie who cares deeply
floating winged ~HUGS~ your way

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



EagleScorpion
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9 posted 2002-05-31 02:25 AM


isnt it so funny how time and time again america gets off it's big lazy ass to go out there and make a difference?
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10 posted 2002-05-31 02:27 AM


Thank you for the wonderful picture, and the thoughts and messages of the poem. I have always considered myself a world citizen. the internet has brought us closer together, and so has this tragic event. Now, if we can really find a way to live peacefully, as one people on this planet, perhaps we just might survive as a species.
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