Open Poetry #20 |
roadwork |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
something in your eyes tonight have seen it for awhile the change of expression reminds me of yesterday a few years a go perhaps something there changed too I didn't stay to see what it was the highway called with offers of eternal life and salvation but it was just a highway afterall what does cold stone know other than curves and ends but maybe now, it has learned something new ©Dark |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very interesting perspective! I really enjoyed the theme of this. Sort of like "grass is not always greener" type of thing! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The fork in the road take dirt or blacktop... either one doesn't change the fact that you left... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) All of life is indeed an endless road, twisting and turning serpentine, only leading us to more than just answers but dreams that are bound to be granted ahead! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, while it is the heart that matters most, I do believe the highway always holds some special purpose, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing words here Dark. ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
et, thanks for the read and notes. Sunshine, good morning lady, yeah leaving works sometimes..but sometimes it is worth staying to see how it ends... James, arrigoto sir. Noah, tomorrow is another road my friend, thanks for the eyes Enchantress, enjoy your hugs lady, thanks for the reads and smilez |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I think I have been on that highway...lets see, is it called Regret, or no Regret...can't remember, but I did leave pieces of my flat tire. Enjoyed this different look through your eyes. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger It's all illusion. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, yep...seems it is a common road huh? I just need to quit looking in the eyes and go back to checking the skirt sway... thanks babe Sy, was or is? true I suspect, thanks amigo |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Never too old or too travelled to learn something new... Curves can have their advantages.. Dips can tickle.. change of scenery can make you fresh.. Just don't blame the potholes..for all them brushes against legs. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina, will ride it out babe but could use a nurse with some of them white stockings and the little hat and.. oh sorry, thanks |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Lovely work here Dark. By the way, do you pick up hitch hikers? I may need a ride. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
janette, thanks babe, sure will give you a ride babe....dress warm though. (grin) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Like this one the best so far, D. Cor |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
but it was just a highway afterall what does cold stone know other than curves and ends but maybe now, it has learned something new I really like this! Desperate for changing |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Mucho enjoyed the ride me friend. jwesley |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
the road takes a lot of work, but it's worth it. After all it gets you from point A to point B!! I guess it depends on when and where you want to get off.....and if!!! you're in rare form DS~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cor, thanks lady, appreciate you here Duncan, thanks my friend, humble thanks JWesley, arrigoto for the review Bluezy, slow hugs lady friend, you know how these darn roads are around here..thanks babe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
where have you gone? |
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