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All Her Lightness
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All Her Lightness |
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Cloudishness Junior Member
since 2002-05-27
Posts 15 |
All Her Lightness She gathered all her lightness and she held him (for he seemed so forbidden not to hold) He answered with his arms the way he kissed her (as he wrapped himself around her fragile soul) They held the moment as closely as a whisper (gently reminded of what they could not control) Jim Sullivan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, love is such a lovely feeling and may it always blossom and have unexpected results on the heart and happiness forever! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jim, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Jim... This reads as gentle as a whisper... I found myself holding my breath while reading... A very good sign indeed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jim Your poem made me think of an embrace between the sun and the moon, or an angel and a human...a hand and a butterfly...a fragile fulfillment. Much enjoyed! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, it does have a light feelng. You portrayed this beautifully. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A very tender warm write......nicely written! |
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