Open Poetry #20 |
Roars |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and what roared louder in the summer of ’64… before the push come shove of adulthood before the roar of the Fab Four… what roared louder than crashing waves upon our shore or felt more ambitious than digging clams for scores.. what roared louder than hormones with itineraries… and all of life still didn’t scare me… but dreams in the ears of the young… that is what roared that day while still children… with plans… ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 29 May 2002 Photography: K. R. Jungel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! Nothing roared louder then than the dreams! Wonderful exciting write... Love the sketch! ~Hugs~ *Hurrying cause a storm is coming in* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Karilea, I know ever so much how you feel, right now I am going through this stage where I dream so so much and desire so many things and sometimes it can be so unbearable I find myself trampling! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I just love how you express things, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karilea I just adored this piece of writing, so vidid were the images and how well I could relate. The sketch accompanying your words was fabulous and I'm wondering if you sketched it? Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Loved this! It helps to remember those times and that age. Shenachie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine..think I was jammin 101 then on a 54 pan...good times and great write |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea That youth and enthusiasm..I still see it in your writing...and that sketch is perfectly California beach. Loved it! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Exquisitely done! |
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