Open Poetry #20 |
My angel |
Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
My Angel Slowly creeping to the edge On my knees terrified I peek my eyes over the rocky ledge All the more horrified On the the edge I look straight down Feeling death upon me I sudden breeze comes over me I feel like I can fly I go to jump off but a whisper stops my feet A whisper in the wind The whisper had the voice of an angel And she told not to jump So I fell back on the grass lying like a lump I heard the voice once again Telling me to open my eyes Slowly my lids come open And i find to my surprise My wife is right above me Holding me tight with tears in her eyes Saying thank god you're alive _______________________________________________ You never feel so whole and right untill you love some one and you know they love you back |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, msweet friend, lately I have felt a little sad because I love my dream girl so very much and I guess she's been busy with work so I miss her so much and just want to hear her say she love sme back now to feel better! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
That was so cute......I liked it so much. *claps* I am glad you desided to write again! -Neala |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I missed your first piece, so let me welcome you to Passions I look forward to more of your work. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
Thanks you all really inspired me. |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
im glad you didnt jump, cause that would have been really bad, but if you did i would have said something really nice about you, liked this too, and i would tell you if i didnt, cause you know how honest i am, well im gonna stop talking about how much i liked your poem, i just cant stop typing, attempting to stop . . . . . . .......now |
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noctrno New Member
since 2002-06-10
Posts 1 |
I feel you...... |
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