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Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2002-05-29 04:17 PM



My Angel


Slowly creeping to the edge
On my knees terrified

I peek my eyes over the rocky ledge
All the more horrified

On the the edge I look straight down
Feeling death upon me

I sudden breeze comes over me
I feel like I can fly

I go to jump off but a whisper stops my feet
A whisper in the wind

The whisper had the voice of an angel

And she told not to jump
So I fell back on the grass lying like a lump

I heard the voice once again
Telling me to open my eyes

Slowly my lids come open
And i find to my surprise
My wife is right above me
Holding me tight with tears in her eyes
Saying thank god you're alive
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You never feel so whole and right untill you love some one and you know they love you back

© Copyright 2002 Hopeless Romantic - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-05-29 04:50 PM


Enjoyed...James
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2 posted 2002-05-29 07:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, msweet friend, lately I have felt a little sad because I love my dream girl so very much and I guess she's been busy with work so I miss her so much and just want to hear her say she love sme back now to feel better! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neala
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since 1999-08-21
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3 posted 2002-05-30 10:02 AM


That was so cute......I liked it so much.
*claps* I am glad you desided to write again!
-Neala

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-05-30 10:55 AM


I missed your first piece, so let me welcome you to Passions
I look forward to more of your work.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
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5 posted 2002-05-30 11:22 AM


Thanks you all really inspired me.
kinson
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6 posted 2002-06-10 07:42 PM


im glad you didnt jump, cause that would have been really bad, but if you did i would have said something really nice about you, liked this too, and i would tell you if i didnt, cause you know how honest i am, well im gonna stop talking about how much i liked your poem, i just cant stop typing, attempting to stop . . . . . . .......now
noctrno
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7 posted 2002-06-11 10:13 PM


I feel you......
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