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Who Could Know?
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Who Could Know? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Who Could Know? Who could have thought of this? That you and I would find such bliss I never would imagined you Would be the one who’d feel so true That we would match in heart and soul You’d be the one to make me whole I would not have looked and thought This is the love I’ve always sought Who would have said that we’d be one? Together we’d lie in love’s sun I couldn’t have known you would be The love I searched for endlessly That I’d need to hear your soft sighs Or I’d wish to drown in your eyes Why didn’t I know any of this? The magic held in your sweet kiss Who could have explained this to me? That you were the one certainly Why didn’t I know way back then? The misconceptions of time’s when Who would think that we’d be a pair? That we would find we really care? The truth is that you do love me And I love you eternally Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the eathquake wind and fire Oh [This message has been edited by Marsha (05-29-2002 09:59 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful tribute to your loved one. He is one lucky fellow  More, please. Much more! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I feel so honored you wrote this about us! What are ya making us for dinner tonight honey?....This is a wonderful little love poem sweets..."Ya dun good!" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marsha...this is for Toe? Gee, lucky guy whomever he is! Wonderful heartfelt write. Enjoyed ever so much. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight over Nancy's comment) Yes, is it Toerag, or maybe LongJohn? LOL! Just kidding! This is sucha lovely and beautiful poem, sweet friend, I know your love will always be so happy to be a part of your heart just as you will in him! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ummmm... Marsha? *G* If this IS for Toe, I'd like to suggest that you include full armor when you pack to visit the U.S... for I'll be after you with my baseball bat!!!! LOL I hope no one tells her my bark is MUCH worse than my bite. *G* I enjoyed this very much, Marsha... he is a lucky guy. *S* |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I happy for you  Eliza Simmons |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Sheer elegance. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Marsha, who could know indeed.. but it's just when you have practically given up that this happens, isn't it? Wonderful writing, love.. keep it up. Pepper |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Together we’d lie in love’s sun I love that line... terrific feeling in this, Marsha. You two are lucky to have each other! ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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