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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-05-29 05:55 AM


I write for your eye belly soul
with poems spoons I feed your sighs
my words are sweet songs
you lick them from my thoughts

I write of my day dream dances
with your night dream fantasy
they are seamless together close
pictures of wicked in combine

I write of your love sounds
and how you rub them on my skin
with wet finger slick touch
you massage my insides with your moans

I write of your hungry woman
when she is pale yet blush
where she is residue of color
flushed to trembles she sighs

I write of your heart place
and how it is warm wood cabin
in forest of endless time
you live with me there then

I write of our one skin love

©Dark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-05-29 06:37 AM



You draw warm
in easy lines

Enjoy Wednesday now...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-05-29 08:40 AM




(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may love continue always to make your heart sigh and paint your heart with colors of blessings and dreams bound to come true forever! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-05-29 08:43 AM


sunshine, thank you lady for your reads and touches

noah thanks sir for the eyes

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-05-29 08:49 AM


Dark Stranger
I'm sure she'll love it.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-05-29 09:00 AM


"I write of our one skin love "
Dark, this one line says everything!
Loved your words this morning.
~Warm hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2002-05-29 09:10 AM


Sy...thanks guy, she seems to enjoy the words, or says so anyway...

Enchantress, bless you lady for your read and comments

Martie
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7 posted 2002-05-29 09:25 AM


DS

This

"I write of your heart place
and how it is warm wood cabin
in forest of endless time
you live with me there then

I write of our one skin love"

especially touched me...a dream place of ever after.

Corinne
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state of confusion
8 posted 2002-05-29 10:18 AM


Agree with Martie, D - when your poems delve beneath the surface into something deeper, then all the mysteries are represented. Know what I mean?

Cor

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2002-05-29 12:02 PM


ms martie, thanks lady friend, glad you felt'
the little glow inside the words

Cor, huh? what? yes I do thanks ms...there is more to me than meets the whispers

rwood
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10 posted 2002-05-29 11:29 PM


You know I love this..each word with purpose and meaning and sooo very articulate in your wonderful Dark way. Oneing..yes..

Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2002-05-30 05:26 AM


Thanx ms reg..
you are a pleasure
when you lean close
and sin-sear

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-30-2002 02:21 PM).]

catalinamoon
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12 posted 2002-05-30 09:03 PM


Any woman would love to hear these word written to her.
Very intriguing, as always.
Sandra

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2002-05-31 06:26 AM


catmoon lady,

glad YOU enjoyed them
can only hope they are warm
on each reader's mind

thanks lady

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