Open Poetry #20 |
tabiture of soul |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I write for your eye belly soul with poems spoons I feed your sighs my words are sweet songs you lick them from my thoughts I write of my day dream dances with your night dream fantasy they are seamless together close pictures of wicked in combine I write of your love sounds and how you rub them on my skin with wet finger slick touch you massage my insides with your moans I write of your hungry woman when she is pale yet blush where she is residue of color flushed to trembles she sighs I write of your heart place and how it is warm wood cabin in forest of endless time you live with me there then I write of our one skin love ©Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You draw warm in easy lines Enjoy Wednesday now... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may love continue always to make your heart sigh and paint your heart with colors of blessings and dreams bound to come true forever! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine, thank you lady for your reads and touches noah thanks sir for the eyes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger I'm sure she'll love it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I write of our one skin love " Dark, this one line says everything! Loved your words this morning. ~Warm hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy...thanks guy, she seems to enjoy the words, or says so anyway... Enchantress, bless you lady for your read and comments |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS This "I write of your heart place and how it is warm wood cabin in forest of endless time you live with me there then I write of our one skin love" especially touched me...a dream place of ever after. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Agree with Martie, D - when your poems delve beneath the surface into something deeper, then all the mysteries are represented. Know what I mean? Cor |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks lady friend, glad you felt' the little glow inside the words Cor, huh? what? yes I do thanks ms...there is more to me than meets the whispers |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You know I love this..each word with purpose and meaning and sooo very articulate in your wonderful Dark way. Oneing..yes.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanx ms reg.. you are a pleasure when you lean close and sin-sear [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-30-2002 02:21 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Any woman would love to hear these word written to her. Very intriguing, as always. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
catmoon lady, glad YOU enjoyed them can only hope they are warm on each reader's mind thanks lady |
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