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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-05-29 03:08 AM

My love is a sea breeze
a gentle caress
subtly soothing
stealing my breath.

My love is a fuchsia
trimmed back on a vine
holding it's shape
in the sunlight cascading.

My love is a candle
incensed by the burning
in the aftermath trailing
that draws me to you.

My love is intense
a matter of fact
skipping a beat
in my heart just like that.

My love is a whisper
it's not quiet or soft
lost in my voice
choking back sobs.

My love is an ocean
submerging, aloft
deeper in depths
that dwells on it's on.

My love is a balcony
that basks in the shade
on a chaise lounge reclining
exposed to all sides.

My love runs rapidly
skimming the surface
cast in the shadows
my reflection destorted.

My love's an instrumental
arranged in detail
played out by heart
half opened and closed.

My love is an echo
a towering inferno
closed behind curtains
rehearsing backstage.

My love's a blue sunset
transforming the sky
breathtaking contrasts
kept still in the night.

My love is the sum
of the price I have paid
a blank check that you've filled
cashed in on my savings.

My love makes my memories
for all of my days
a thought better of
that time can't erase.

My love is a compass
of measureless miles
a sentimental journey
from all points of view.

My love is flippant
when it's breaking in two
quite simply my darling
my love's all about you...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-05-29 03:53 AM

I lovw the trips this took me on...

from lounge chair to crescendo to climax..

detail would be great--"having a lovely time, I am sending details..." <--postcard from serenity!!!

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 2002-05-29 03:54 AM

all about you - i like that. very cool

chris

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-05-29 09:13 AM

bluzy, enjoyed this look at the lady
seems she is together
and pretty well packaged too

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-05-29 09:25 AM

BluesSerenade
Yes, love is all those things and more. Enjoyed

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-05-29 10:09 AM

Blues

Enjoyed all these different aspects of love thoughts.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-05-29 11:38 AM

Lori~

I love how you did this.....*sigh* it can be a grand emotion...thanks for sharing yours....

hugsssss
Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2002-05-29 12:48 PM

Isn't it wonderful how Much love is? In so many ways it touches, becomes part of, everything about us. Wonderful BS...

jwesley

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

8 posted 2002-05-29 05:03 PM

Very well done Blues...it sings like a siren's song...melodic, and breezy...beautiful!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-05-29 05:10 PM

WoW Lori!!
This is exquisite!
Loved it!
~Hugs~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2002-05-29 06:59 PM

Your love is worth much, I hope he appreciates it.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-05-29 08:27 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this list of loving beauty you've written, sweet friend, may love always guide you like a compass to your destiny and make you happy forever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

12 posted 2002-05-29 08:40 PM

My love's an instrumental
arranged in detail
played out by heart
half opened and closed

Simply marvelous - the entire write is wonderful... and I just adore that particular bit above.

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

13 posted 2002-05-31 12:03 PM

My love is a compass
of measureless miles
a sentimental journey
from all points of view.

Oh so well said, Lori

~loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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