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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Sorry for this downer, I have missed my Joanna so so much for a week and I love her too much and feel so sad and lonely without her! I love you Joanna!  Insomnia By: Noah Eaton 5/28/02 When I lie in bed I feel like I'm floating on an ocean You appear before me in my dreams trying to swim for my mattress Then the current pushes you back before I can grab your hand I can't see through this fogand the lighthouse only traces tears of sadness I need you I can't lose you I miss you so much, I want to say I love you to you again I feel dead without you I can't sleep without you There saying everything will be OK again Where are you going? Have you lost yourself from me? Yesterday we used to feel so carefree together Now the world seems to have pushed us further apart I never wished for it to come to this, I just want to hold you Not now, not while everything seems so magical, please don't leave me with a broken heart I need you I can't lose you I miss you so much, I want to say I love you to you again I feel dead without you I can't sleep without you There saying everything will be OK again Where are you going? Have you lost yourself from me? I've long been convinced that the stars hold some miracles That shine so warm, reminding me dreams can come true Please God, let me have the faith to still believe in this outcome Let my love find me back to my heart soon... I need you I can't lose you I miss you so much, I want to say I love you to you again I feel dead without you I can't sleep without you There saying everything will be OK again Where are you going? Have you lost yourself from me? Tell me everything will be OK, love Again... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-28-2002 10:51 PM).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hey i know how that feels.. sucks man! i really feel where you're coming from. i miss those days.... really puts it into perspecetive when you're torn apart from each other, makes you realize how much you truly care about her FEAR NOT DEATH, |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
============================================= I've long been convinced that the stars hold some miracles That shine so warm, reminding me dreams can come true Please God, let me have the faith to still believe in this outcome Let my love find me back to my heart soon... ============================================= Hi Noah dear~ Such longing and heartache in this sweetie, I'm hear to say everything will be O'K as well, just believe it and your wish will come true ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah, when I saw Insomnia, I figured you were writing something I could relate to (been suffering from that ailment for several years now). Might not help much right now, but from what I've read in your words and thoughts, everything will be okay again, no matter what happens. You're a positve, upbeat and caring guy. And you're strong. Core |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Joanna is such a lucky woman, Noah...and you are such a caring and sensitive young man. this is a lovely, sad and reaching poem. Not now, not while everything seems so magical, please don't leave me with a broken heart and this passage reminds me of how I feel about my disease...  ~sad sad hugsLyra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow. I guess you really miss her. Good! Always remember this feeling and she will make you a happy man  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, too much love is not good and too little is not either, but there is a "somewhere in between"...we all need time apart. Great piece! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah~Hi sweetie! Please try and keep your chin up and above all else, keep writing. It really helps pass the time... AND more than anything, turns out some great poetry. All will be well.... I shall cast a magic spell! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I thought this might be about the new movie that just came out...it is a murder mystery... There was only one way for me to kick that insomnia... I trusted in God that he would provide for me...and as I trusted the peace of the Lord came over me and I began to sleep peacefully....it was a process and it took a period of time for me to begin to trust in him...and the outcome was not what I expected but he knows what we need...he can provide...James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
from one "Toe" type to another...yanno, it's just those damn women and what they do to us poor guys....geesch!!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey Noah, I bet she will be back soon. This poem would sure bring me back! Sandra |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Noah, there is little to rival the ache of extended longing, is there? sigh so many man-tears in this, and heartquakes. If fate can be induced, then so be it! Writing like this can only be told in poetry. As it should be... jeff hang tough, amigo! LQA (love conquers all) |
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