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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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in shades of even, I find myself again listening to the night the whispering stars the questioning moonbeams the profound shadows pieces of Midnight that wait to be put together by a phrase of spirit I stand among the light here, where streams of amber give way to streams of white and I wonder what I can find in the florescence of it all what will I find in revealed light? will it be something that I can hold onto? something that will speak to me through the luminaria? or, will it be something more? something like being -------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven ... I love the transition ..."..where streams of amber..." Well done. Bob |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent questions...and superbly written poetry...thank you Sven... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
what will I find in revealed light? will it be something that I can hold onto? something that will speak to me through the luminaria? or, will it be something more? something like being ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sven, incredible writing...just incredible. Enjoyed so much this afternoon. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Very good, enjoyed the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Sven...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Beautifully penned my friend, well done. I enjoyed this very much ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the wonderful mystical feel behind these words, sweet friend, may you find light and pure comfort within the light always and bathe in the spiritual joy it offers! (sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven,. thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Oooooo...you are speaking my language! Love this piece of pondering and yes..being is it. Love where this ends up. Sincerely, Reg |
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Cloudishness Junior Member
since 2002-05-27
Posts 15 |
Just as you have so beautifully stated I'm sure it will be something more C [email protected] |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Oh, Sven, this is wonderful! I love the phrase "pieces of Midnight that wait to be put together by a phrase of spirit". It brings a lovely visual to mind...a quilt of darkness, sewn with moonbeams and starlight. Bravo! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ewe be. And ewe be gooood Oh GR8 Voice of the Northland |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ something like this...indeed, always such a delight to find your words graced here...beautiful dear friend.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Always, always enjoy the depths of your thought, me friend. jwesley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Bob, thank you. . . that's one of my favorite lines here. . . Magnus, thank you Sir. . . I'm still working on the answers. . . Enchantress, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Sy, always good to see you here my friend. . . thank you. . . James, thank you my friend. . . tracie, I'm always glad when I write something that's enjoyed so much. . . thank you. . . Noah, yes. . . mystical. . . something tells me that you know exactly what I'm talking about here. . . Reg, I've always known that we speak the same language. . .  . . . glad that you liked. . . Cloudishness, first of all, welcome!! and I hope that it will be as well. . . thank you. . . Tara!! Hi there. . . yes. . . you've found it exactly. . . I just need a loom now, and I'm all set. . . good to see you again my friend. . . Interloper, eye b knot as good as ewe oh Great Voice of the Southland. . . Lauren, the delight is all mine when I find such wonderful words of enjoyment my friend. . . thank you. . . james, it would seem that, at times, we think the same thoughts my friend. . . thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sven, I really like this. I really do - like a..hmm..gentle rain fall in some way.. cool!  K |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sven.... I speak to you through the luminaria....."Good Sven, good young man.......you have just evolved into being!" Nice to have you here! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love it. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
John, this is incredible if I must say so! You always write in an awesome mannor. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
K, thanks. . . yes, that's one way to see it. . . a way I never thought of. . . passing shadows, I'm glad!! eric, I can hear you my friend. . . thank you. . . walker, thank you!! Saunni, you can say so. . . but  . . . well, see?? thank you. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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