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Four Seasons Of Our Love
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Four Seasons Of Our Love |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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It was Summertime when I first met you You were swimming in the turquoise sea How on earth was I to know From that day on you would be with me So many times we'd walk at sunset Two lovers side by side Our hearts were beating in unison A love so powerful we could not hide In Autumn you and I would go walking Shuffling through the colored leaves You proposed to me beside the river With a single red rose on bended knee In the evening you took me dancing Together we moved so well to the beat How very close were our two bodies For we generated so much heat In Winter we'd snuggle close together Our love continually kept us warm Such a strong bond we shared together Feeling like we could weather any storm In the Springtime you and I were married I wore a garland of flowers in my hair So besotted we were with one another That it seemed we were the only ones there My love for you is still growing Like a flower I am always in bloom Such an effect your love has upon me My spirit soars as high as the moon So no matter where life may lead us I know we'll never be far apart For your love is held securely Within the confines of my heart Suetang [This message has been edited by Suetang (05-27-2002 09:14 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Something tells me that you are still in the Spring of your life...with moments of Summer mixed into it.... Another good one... |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Sue again this is exquisite writing you shade the seasons of your love in delightful colours of light. Truly superb writing IWIHWT, but since I didn’t and wouldn’t have the skill to do so I’ll keep yours to read when I need to see what real writing is all about. Excellent work I love it and see it’s another I beat mum too. Mum dearest heart you’re a slacker   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel for my dream girl Joanna always make sme feel so happy, and I dream always of being with her, like in the winter I dream we're in a sleigh ride together and bundled up and kissing each other slips to keep us warm, then in spring I see all the sparrow shappily chirping around her and butterflies dancing and the summer I dream of meeting her finally! (kiss on cheek) May you and your love together live endless seasons of happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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