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Open Poetry #20

Take Me Into Your Heart

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-05-27 08:47 PM

Take me deep inside your soul
To the very centre of your being
Before you love seemed superfluous
For me it simply had no meaning

Take me on a journey
To where our love can roam free
Indulge me in heavenly desires
As you give your love to me

Take me inside your heart
Safe and warm in your embrace
Let me trace my finger lightly
Around the curve of your face

Take me down to the water
And make love to me on the sand
Kiss me beneath the moonlight
As our hearts now beg command

Take me to where I've never been
Fill my heart with only you
You've given my life new meaning
And my heart remains forever true

Suetang

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-05-27 08:50 PM

Sue, you too are an incurable romantic...

Nicely done.. I hope your life is filled
with all of the wonder you write..

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

2 posted 2002-05-27 08:51 PM

Sue this is exquisite writing the words flowing over the page with such ease. Why is it that you can write so very How do you manage to set the scene and show the spirit to perfection. I loved this one, it has your sense of life running through it.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-27 09:48 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I too have these dreams all the time and dream of having my Joanna close to me on the beach! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may true love always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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