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Night Meetings |
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CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi 
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This one is about me and this guy..and he would sneak over at night to see me cause he lived right now the road...well, I could never go out because the house alarm was on..so we would talk and stuff through the screen in the window. It was really sweet. Love was just a whisper Our hands upon the screen We had to keep it hidden It had to be unseen The letters that you wrote me The things you used to say I wish we could go back to those wonderful days The moon outside the window was our light so we could see, how much I loved you, and how you thought you loved me. Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Haven't I seen this posted before? You obviously think you have a lot to say, and perhaps you do. It would be easier to judge if so many of them didn't come at once. As for style, You seem to be developing one, I would suggest you pay attention to meter, enable the flow of the words to make the beat. Gloom |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Even without the explanation....I think it would have been easy to interpret...You described it very well... Tender little moments....the things that live on in our hearts for a very long time. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think you need to reply to your email from the Moderators concerning your multiple posts. A copy of this poem was closed earlier today and you have reposted it. Please contact me poetdevine@yahoo.com. |
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