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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-05-27 10:29 AM

Would you give me love?
If I ask you
I can't find
myself a love,
I can't find a heart,
I was searching
for a long time,
To look for a love,
A kind of love
That lasts,
Can't find It
I can't off mymind
It Is not easy
To look for someone
like you
Who can give me love,
So much love,
I can sing a song
Tonight
Because Iam by myself
Needed someone
to comfort me
I was empty
Inside my heart
My heart couldn't find a love
And still can't find It
Do you think?
Would you give me love?
A love that can be
Shared by you
Can't find.....
Can't find It....
A love

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-05-27 10:35 AM

Hey vandana, I would like to have some love too. Hope you find it.

Miss T. Eyed
Junior Member

since 2002-05-26

Posts 47

2 posted 2002-05-27 10:38 AM

This is a very sad poem, everyone needs love, and I hope it finds you. I liked the way you wrote this poem, it brings out the real need for love, in a subtle way.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-05-27 11:46 AM

Vandana darling girl this is a really good piece from you, truly excellent writing. The aching sadness flows through it and the end wraps it up perfectly. Truly beautiful writing darling girl, your writing is so soul deep it communes with me

Wonderful work

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-05-27 01:25 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Vandana, this is so sad, sweet friend, everyone should be loved and no one should ever feel lonely and my heart goes out to you, though I know very soon love will find you and make you happy forever! (kiss on cheek) This is sadly beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-05-27 03:59 PM

Very nice vandana...James

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