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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-27 09:48 AM

Circling Of The Moon

last night there was
a circling of the moon
I missed it for it passed
by me too soon
and lost a rhythmic
graceful chance
to touch it’s tender
illuminating dance
my absence does not
eclipse my enthrall
to be the wax caressed
in star filled call
for excited sky shows
phase of new tide
and we shall again
melt side by side

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-05-27 10:02 AM

1slick_lady
You write so well, enjoyed.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2002-05-27 10:12 AM

st...i feel the SAME way about the way you write!!!! helen

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2002-05-27 10:13 AM

The moon was beautiful last night.....
you wrote it well....

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-05-27 10:16 AM

This is a beauiful poem about the moon. Enjoyed reading it.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-05-27 09:54 PM

Beautiful. I always feel like I need to take advantage of the full moon, and then feel bad when I don't.
Sandra

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

6 posted 2002-05-27 10:00 PM

It was a truly wonderful moon last night. I got to see it rise over the ocean, first appearing as if it were on fire, and by mid-sky it was a giant peach... and the whole drive home the light was so amazing - the deer were all out feeding and we could see them quite clearly. (and thankfully they stayed away from my car)

I am so sorry you missed it, but you've penned a great piece

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-05-27 10:27 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too just love that full-moon fever and you paint it so well in your words! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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