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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
"Lonely, Lonely" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1: Well one empty night it Will turn into two Then what do I do I get lonely, lonely Verse 2: Offer myself a drink Offer myself two Now what do I do I get lonely, lonely Lift 1: All these borring songs Playing on...The radio Bottom's up again Now and then...It's all so, so Verse 3: Walk into a store And find a sad mood So what do I do I get lonely, lonely Verse 4: Take the car for a spin Drive down an old rute And what do I do I get lonely, lonely Lift 2: Some dicount prices .- Ties us...To the word cheep When the party's gone For too long...We go to sleep Bridge: When the face in the mirror start to laugh And tears spell out the words "It's too bad" There's nothing left for me to do Then to get...Lonely, lonely Verse 5: When all my fears are gone And my demons lose Well what do I do I get lonely, lonely... Lonely...(I'm feeling) "Re-til fade" [This message has been edited by Hallucination (05-26-2002 05:43 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Definitely a rock song!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this is a wonderful rock song that would make a hit on the Billboard I'm sure! (smiles) This rocks, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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