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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-05-26 02:47 PM

Passionate dance under the palm
as drum beats echo all around
emotions sway under the sun
as lovers swoon unto the sound

The fronds whip against purple sky
coconuts full and hanging low
a taste of tropical desire
ready to fall when trade winds blow

Shimmer of life affirming love
no ending could such lovers see
their romance unerneath the palms
the way the world is meant to be.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

1 posted 2002-05-26 03:30 PM

catalinamoon,

I always love you poems

You always have such a descriptive nature, you can see your words flow.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-05-26 03:38 PM

Ah Sandra...this reminds me of my trip to
Hawaii last year, and the evenings sitting
near the music provided....watching the
palms move in the breeze...

Aloha...and an excellent piece of Pacific
romance...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-05-26 04:37 PM

Lovely description...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-05-26 04:45 PM

Beautiful Sandra!
I do hope you and yours
are enjoying the holiday weekend.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2002-05-26 05:21 PM

This is certainly a very touching and romantic scene under the coconut palm. So beautifully simple and well expressed!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-05-26 06:49 PM

(smiles) Oh Sandra, this is a paradise of a poem, sweet friend, I love the tropical worlds and I wish this love to come true for you and take you on vacation under the palmettos always! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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