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Storming Thoughts
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Storming Thoughts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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It is storming, as my heart waits to be heard. Roaring of thunder conceals the intensity of each beat. Tears roll down like rain, one eye at a time, as hope takes its turn on me. I sit here needing to pull the plug, sparks flying, time running out, once again... Nature, my undoing. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! There's a lot going on inside you in this piece. The anticipation of awaiting fulfilling passion is well expressed on the playground of hope! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that's right and the anticipation will be coming to an end as it really is thundering here and will be preventing me the follow through... ;( thanks E...I love storms but darn if the timing of this one is off on a holiday weekend hugssss M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-26-2002 05:39 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw shucks! Now I feel bad for you. But hey there'll be other nights! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
maybe, maybe not..but I am just hoping I don't have to pull the plug of this computer as I figure out what to do with myself..all dressed up now and no place to go ... that's the way it goes sometimes M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Wow, your wonderful thoughts shine through these pages, sweet friend, every thought is indeed a storm of words and you bring about so many here! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ I love the way you worked the storm into this~ What 'illuminating' inspire the lightning will be ! Oops ! ... guess not, huh ? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ Wahhhh ! Can you work on teensy-weensy little 'poetry books' in the dark ?  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thunder and lightning, hail and flash floods....I would be pulling that PC plug myself, and lighting scented vanilla candles. Were some stormy emotional thoughts triggering this event? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The thunder you hear is my heart clattering to the floor of my soul. The lightning you see is caused by the grinding of my teeth at your unhappiness. Just one smile on your face will help my poor body to recuperate. You don't want to be responsible for my ill heath, do you? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Very intense, enjoyed the read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I thank each of you for your kind responses, and "I"..I hope I am not sending my poor health your way... M |
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