Open Poetry #20 |
Feelings Inside |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Leading to this heart of mine I am going to keep it locked real tight It isn't going to get me, not this time It only seems to stay for a short while Long enough to make me feel once again The love I had once before, and lost Is one I just cannot seem to win The love that I have always known Never did have so many conditions As the love I have recieved from you Which always led to your rejections This isn't the kind of love I need from you I need the kind that is mine to keep Which will give me pleasant dreams Each night when I lay down to sleep By Sue 5-26-02 [This message has been edited by SmartChick (05-26-2002 02:50 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Excellent work, Sue...and excellent thoughts contained within. ~ poetic hugs Lyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think we all enjoy love that comes without conditions or expectations. Most love to receive, yet at the same time...should give in return. I like a 50/50 split, though I doubt it seldom ever works out to just that. Excellent thoughts Sue....I hope you find what you are asking for..I don't see that it is too much... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yes, that's right, and with such a loving heart as yours you are destined to find what is right for your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I wish you the best, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely thoughts penned here Sue. No,you are not asking too much. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQ~ You are learning to open your heart ... say what's on your mind ... and it is turning out some lovely poetry~ Keep it up gal .... nice job on the formatting too~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As you grow in your writing, I have come to see such great things from inside you. I admire and look forward to your views. ThisDiamond |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I like your no nonsense point of view..the clarity is optimal |
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