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He Said.........(For Christopher)
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He Said.........(For Christopher) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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He said, don’t rhyme instead whisper as to cause my heart pause…. to hold the moment of your touch in poetic melt to sooth the chill left from straight lines and conformity He wanted jagged edges mingled with ragged breaths that cloud the candlelight swirl emotions, till they spill over making reality rearrange….. ~SEA~ |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
i'm all jagged edges, you see, bent across an ellipses... running wild and free. i'll chase around your rhyme that whispered heat of passion... save you the pain of mine. ok, that's it - i tried to rhyme, but everytime it blanks my mind, so unrefined... you rock lady, and you whisper... oh so well. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks, you ain't so bad yourself there Kissy Face  and your rhymes are fantastic  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Yep...why he's my new hero. But don't tell him 'cause his ego's near big as mine. Good one, SEA for C! but I'm lonely now, and I don't know how |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
you CANNOT be serious Susanofer - my rhymes are... well, we won't go there, becaue we're not supposed to do any personal attacks on members, and i might get mad at me if i start bashing me  Duncan - I didn't see that. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well I won't get in the middle of this playful word romp but I will say I think Sea wrote a nice tribute! Probably more there than I know about...he he have a nice day! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Umm...I have to agree with C, Sea (heh) and say that his rhymes usually suck. Ooops..is that member bashing? Nah..it's only his poetry lollol... his freeverse? Ah well, that's another story... this is a lovely tribute, from a nice poetic hand..  K |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...you write anyolway you want... but if you have to cater to some cantankerous type poets, [we won't name names], then we all win... hugs, Mom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, I think he needs another dip in the Sea for not reading between the lines. LOL Enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very very cool...all of it...the poem and the responses ... LOL@Chris, Duncan and Sy. I remembering being one and the same ... closer even than the heat and the flame. Tom Kimmel [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (05-26-2002 09:18 AM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Nice SEA....very touching.... HEY CHRISTOPHER~ If I can RHYME you can...LOL but give credit where its due, I've only done it maybe 3 times..... I myself, tend to stick to free~verse.....Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, yes, yes, I think Christopher is a wonderfully remarkable poet and friend to us all whose words are always so striking, and he sure can rhyme too! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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