Open Poetry #20 |
Letting You Go |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
In the trembling of letting you go it’s your love that remains sustains and keeps me until your touch is no longer an ache..... ~SEA~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
until your touch is no longer an ache..... No time soon. but I'm lonely now, and I don't know how |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
and keeps me until your touch is no longer an ache..... So...how long does that take??? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cowboy, I hope it is soon.... Tracey, for me, it won't be that long....but still far too long, ya know? Hugs for both of you |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
is that a true possibility? it's been three years... and that still isn't true. i think the ache is always there, it just gets muted over time. wonderful wish Susan, and well said (couldn't avoid a little rhyme though, could ya? ) hugs |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
aww Kissy Face, I can't help the rhyme it was just there three years? No I don't think the ache ever goes away fully, but when you know they are coming back, it makes the ache "do-able" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Strong poem, Susan. Few words, with lots to say. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love it when that picture is used by poets - there are so many thoughts that can flow from it... thoughts like these... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Susan, this is beautiful with a tinge of sadness, sweet friend, I hope now true love fills your heart with delight and the afterglow of it is soft and light and never aches! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!' May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
sustains and keeps me until your touch is no longer an ache..... It was 3 years ago this past Wednesday, that my first husband died. We have been watching videos of him, all week...and, the ache is still here, but they are tinged now, with pleasant memories he left for all of us. A simply beautiful poem! ~ sad hugs Lyra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Exquisite thoughts ... exquisite presentation~ *applause* *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Exactly...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A lot said in a few lines.... and well said! How long did you say??? Hummm |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Three years for me too, and still an ache, but learning to keep it at bay. Splendid write, but I do believe it takes a lifetime. |
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Cloudishness Junior Member
since 2002-05-27
Posts 15 |
This is so haunting. The pain and the relief. Just beautiful. J Sullivan |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love is a pain in the ache~~~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sea, I love this poem, and the picture. I wonder if the ache ever really, truely goes away. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hey...I can "touch" painlessly too? Whatchya doing at lunch?....Nicely done sweets....yanno?, your poetry's almost as pretty as your pic?... |
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