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without you...today
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without you...today |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
today it is progress not to reach into my pocket too often forgetting small steps I don’t remember the ground shaking like this before without you…today suddenly nothing is familiar even love laughs at the fools who rushed in only to leave before the second act even love hurts without you suddenly nothing is the same but I'm lonely now, and I don't know how |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
good write |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 I can sooooo relate...the ending made me tear up.... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is too familiar...for I had a day just like this...and no one to tell it too And so I'll remember you I'll remember the days and the thousands of ways you pulled me through And dream of all the things you've seen Chameleons Damn, my new sig line cut off...too many characters!! This is what it should have been...guess I'll have to find a new one And so I'll remember you, I'll remember the days and the thousands of ways you pulled me through, And dream of all the things you've seen, Of all the faces and all of the places you have been, (Tears, by The Chameleons) [This message has been edited by Tracey (05-26-2002 01:36 AM).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
That's it Duncan. You've got the 'aloneness' feeling I know so well. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
i'm telling you man, we've been down many of the same paths... routing it out, and well. i appreciate all this stuff Duncan, really do. on a side note - this reminded me of a song by Savage Garden, which you may be interested in, called The Lover After Me. Just a point of possible interest. Chris |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
without you…today suddenly nothing is familiar even love laughs at the fools who rushed in only to leave before the second act even love hurts without you suddenly nothing is the same ========================== trust me D....not even love is laughing ..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
even love laughs at the fools who rushed in only to leave before the second act ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dang! I feel so bad for you Duncan... But, I am glad to see you writing it out. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such is the feeling once felt of love in life to the bone Struggling to endure what's dealt while living love when alone. My heart is with you Duncan... WE have all felt these moments... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Duncan, this is sooooo heartaching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, I know soon you will find all your heart is looking for, just hang in there and believe in yourself! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan,  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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