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PaulValjean Junior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 10Fl. |
I'd like to say hello to everyone here, and well met on the road...*s*.... I'd also like to say that I have a web page, run by my son, with lots of poems, and also a pretty good story if anyone would care to look at it... The link is on my profile, and thank you to the awesome people of pip for providing this site. Poetry is above all else for *touching* people... I'll only post here rhymes that aren't on my web site, and I hope that some time, here or there, I manage to Touch all of you, as I'm certain you will me....*s*... Oh yeah, the poem....and a story....*L*... Surprised! Surprised! To meet a stranger On such a dreary night When all the stars have twinkled out And moon so far from sight.... Surprised! To meet a stranger On such a weary trail Far from any nook or niche The boldest sailors sail... Surprised! At such a welcome An opened hand salute From so surprised a stranger With equal bloody boot.... Surprised! At such a gentle touch When kindred hands connect And wond'rous then to share a fire The cold forgot to check... Surprised! To gaze upon her My heart was nearly stopped Surprised, to see a halo When hood and veil were dropped.... Who art Thou, well met stranger And whither wouldst Thou roam? "I'm only just an angel," said. "Come far, to lead thee home"... That love is all there is |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may she always be the best friend of your heart and bring great cheer from the heavens of your dreams to you! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ralph, thank you for shaing!  May love and light always shine upn you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What a neat ending! I really like this one. Nan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful piece here. Thanks for this one.... I'm off to visit the site. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome to Passions and what a lovely poem, I too loved the ending, as what person person to meet than an angel. Oh, and the link to your home page is not working - went to sign your guest book. Again, welcome you will love the people in this community of friends.~* Tell someone in your family that you love them today *~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like that twist at the end! Good writing and it's nice to read your work! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tried to visit the site but a message comes up saying page not found...perhaps you would like to check it out. |
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PaulValjean Junior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 10Fl. |
Thanks for letting me know the link was not good... I added the Hyper-text call and it seems to be fixed...*s*.... I hope you all enjoy, and if you intend to read Ruby and the Poet's story you may not want to read all the featured poems first... it can all be easily read in a couple hours... and I shall be eternally grateful to all who sign the guestbook...*s*.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul A lovely thought, a stranger looks so different through admirations eyes, or love. Enjoyed this! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sire, I beg thee, know that certain particular poets are going to request of thee to leave us missives, such as this, for this delights all eyes... Well done, good Sire... |
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