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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-05-24 07:02 PM


A life without love
is like a garden without flowers
a song without words
a bird without wings
or a rainbow without color

And for me to be without you
is like the moon without the stars
a diamond without its lustre
a heart without a heartbeat
or a body without a soul

But with you here by my side
I am capable of anything
You are the light in my life
the brightest star in my constellation
the substance for my soul
and my reason for living

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-05-24 07:12 PM



Here's wishing you a full sky of diamonds...

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2 posted 2002-05-24 07:52 PM


The breath of a heart in beat
The ray of a sun in retreat
Whispers of moments of tell
Rings of the clap of a bell

All parts of live...with love...

Beautiful words Sue...yet again...

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-05-24 11:12 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, this both made me smile and cry, for I couldn't help but cry because I still yearn for my love so very much and I yearn so much of being with her because I love her so much and feel incomplete without her! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThUnDeRkYsS
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4 posted 2002-05-25 03:53 AM


Such a beautiful expression of your Love, enjoyed in much.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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5 posted 2002-05-25 04:18 AM


This is very beautiful Sue. My sister is getting married in about 3 weeks and I am very excited for her. As for me, I am deathly afraid I'm doomed to a life without the love of a significant other. I have friends, but I'd love to find a man who can love me for everything I have to offer him. And I can love for everything he has to offer me.

                               Dawn

Christopher
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6 posted 2002-05-25 04:22 AM


"A life without love? But, that's terrible!"

"No, being on the street. That's terrible"

"No."

"No?"

"Love is like oxygen. Love i s a many splendoured thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love!"

"Don't start that again."

"All you need is love..."

Sorry - this made me think of Moulin Rouge.

Peace,

Chris

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-05-25 06:12 AM


Allright I have a song for you..."What the world needs now is love sweet love...it's the only thing that theirs just too little of."  Jackie DeShannon I believe.  James
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8 posted 2002-05-26 01:33 PM


Su:  How very fortunate you are to have this kind of love in your life! I know that you cherish it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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