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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Self-pity isn't pretty, is it dear? Red swollen eyes from all his lies are, simply put, a poor disquise for sniv'ling fear. Take up your cross, or be the boss this time! Don't be the one who comes undone, go out and have a little fun-and ditch that slime. So even if he doesn't sniff and mope, he might decide you've got some pride, and want to have you by his side. Or he's a dope. Though I would be so drunk with glee, so thrilled to see the back of clueless Jack, I'd dive right in and help him pack, my dreams fulfilled. Nan |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nan darling girl this is simply exquisite, I truly love this diamond from you. You have an amazing ability to write with such clarity. And this had me smiling I had an insane urge to call you go girl. As always darling heart you excel and I love it I love it utterly utterly I’ve missed your writing so much here, thank goodness you’ve posted this I was getting Nan withdrawal   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the eathquake wind and fire Oh [This message has been edited by Marsha (05-24-2002 01:16 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully done, Nan...and full of those assertive, womanly feelings that I have come to admire...  ~ assertive woman hugsLyra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strong, decisive! Go for broke! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! Such clarity fills your words, sweet friend, yes, go for it and follow your hearts instincts always! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Oh Nan, this is a powerhouse of a poem! I love the strong identity in this! Superb writing! Love, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am woman hear me roar!! Excellent write! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marsha, Nan-withdrawal is a condition that is all too often overlooked by today's medical community. Help us raise awareness with your donation of just a few dollars to the Nan Foundation for ...Oh, heck! There I go again! Lyra, I thought it might be a bit too rambunctious to post here, and almost didn't. I'm glad you liked it. Assertive womanly group hugs all round! Sunshine, Gee, thanks!I always do! Noah, Thank you, I can always count on your kindness. Morcastlin, Glad you liked it! Nan [This message has been edited by Pilgrimage (05-24-2002 04:31 PM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Enchantress, Or possibly meow? I always roar in soprano, it's a bit odd, I know. Nan |
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