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Gravity's Naivety
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Gravity's Naivety |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Gravity’s Naivety In the wiles of a dreamers coup I encountered the real of you. The nectar of your inner self The essence hidden in yourself The butterfly you call a moth A moth of very fancy cloth A vibrancy that vacillates Literacy that fascinates That weaves the gold within the skies To hews that simply hypnotize That fills the rainbows pot of gold To all a dreamer would behold. And spins a web of worded bliss That goes beyond a simple kiss It magnifies our seek of goal It sweetens up our very soul. It takes away our gravity And leaves us with naivety. |
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CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi |
I LOVE this write. Especially the part about the moth and the part about the web and kiss and also the ending. Well written. Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CowgirlFreedom17 Thank you so much for the read and nice reply. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I think it is a very lovely feeling to feel naive, with the spirit of the child singing in your heart! (sigh) May we always halt and look upon the many wonders of the world with a song in heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
View the scene with great delight a winged small wonder in her flight she blushes air with magic dust and keeps the soul from gathering rust... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The butterfly you call a moth A moth of very fancy cloth A vibrancy that vacillates Literacy that fascinates That weaves the gold within the skies To hews that simply hypnotize That fills the rainbows pot of gold To all a dreamer would behold. And spins a web of worded bliss That goes beyond a simple kiss It magnifies our seek of goal It sweetens up our very soul. It takes away our gravity And leaves us with naivety. ===================================== Oh Stinky...you dont play fair....hows a moth supposed to fly when all she can do is sigh(Sy)  How do I thank you for painting butterfly wings on a moth so many times now. I need a new vocabulary and dictionary... cuz you just took my words away...and at times like this...calling you "cool" just wont cut it. But you are so very very cool.   ~*~ In the scheme and gleam of chasing one's butterfly dreams ... the need of gravity's deed seems overrated. Naivety deems us flights to fantasy's extremes ... plants the seeds of Eden's elysian fields of elated. Those who wait in wonder for wings of naive to set them free ... will find reprieve when they believe beyond boundaries of gravity. *winkiewinkie*  I remembering being one and the same ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend that she does. Sunshine, Nice comment, enjoyed. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The butterfly you call a moth" I like that line....this is very smooth Seymour, very |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, What I write is less than nothing compared to the delight of your firefly replies. You are the delight of my day and often of my night " That was added by Randy." Love ya Tink. Sea, Thank you for the smooth. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Seymour~ You could transform any moth into a beautiful butterfly just by seeing into their heart and writing out what you see. I love your thoughtful words Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmittenKitten And I love your reply. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well, I just went floating through another of your poems with just enough gravity at the end to make me realize how naive I can be when I'm inspired by the written word! Signed: Mr Moth......but I've got one of Ted Nugent's shirts on! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, LOL enjoyed, thanks for the read. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy How do you do this? Keep writing such perfect poetic wonders that fill my soul with such sweetness, I can feel the quest to know all along my nerves right into my deepest part of my soul. You know I’m going to say that I love this utterly, outstanding writing as always YOU are a fabulous writer and this is utter delight. I’m awed by you time after time Seymour darling heart your writing is always something incredibly special, this is stunning utterly utterly stunning. I missed you yesterday, did you miss me too? There in my minds eye I knew there was beauty I was just unable to reach out for it. So today I’ll have to sup at the mind of find and drink your think. You do know I utterly utterly love this don’t you? Mmmmmm you are as always splendiferous  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
As I flowed through this wonderful poem...I felt a much needed smile...thank you...this poem is beautiful... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Sigh*Mour~ 'spins a web of worded bliss' Indeed ! CAPTIVATING~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Yes I did miss you yesterday, but krissy said you weren't feel well. I hope you are back up to snuff now, for I love your stuff. Startime, Beauty sees as beauty is. Marge, Captivating, I only wish. LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy your sky, with only words, flies! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, this is one big *sigh*...waiting to happen!! Love this one, sure do! ~Sigh Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Very sweet, love you too. Enchantress, Thank you and hugs back. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think I will start calling you Silky Sy.. cause this is a smooth as silk over dew... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Your pretty slick yourself, thank you my friend. |
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