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Soft White |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Soft White I have but one thing of yours in real, the softness of memories that lay against cheek. It absorbs my tears in missing you, receives the goodnight kisses awaiting your lips. Its freshness reminds me of the nearness of you crisp to my eyes, soft to my heart. I hold you in my hand when I place it in mine and in it, I gather the feel of yours that remains with me always. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 missing is a terrible emotion |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this makes my eyes sting...extremely emotional write....*big hugs for you*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A soft and lovely write. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh you are such a romantic Maureen! Lovely read! ! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ 'the softness of memories that lay against cheek.' soft indeed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Perfectly said from a heart that truly feels things deeply...hugs... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Damn, ah wish I'd thought t' call y' WynterGal. Summer Squirrel ....... oh yeh, the poem! Loved i'! She said burn ... together. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
passing shadows ..it's an emotion that just makes loving one more intense *s SEA..thank you. it's not meant to be sad..just meant to let someone know I have something I hold dearly...that gives me sweet memories when he is not near. Seymour, thank you  e...I think you know me well *s thank you! Marge~ thank you dear friend, there is something about having a piece of soft belonging to another to lean against... when missing him.. M Karen,thank you...Hope you are lowering that wall day by day  hugs M bsquirrel..oh she was my longest and dearest poet friend on the net..she called me that ages ago on here..she has it copyrighted SquirrelyQ..haven't you gone on vacation yet? How can I miss you if you never leave  byeM |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Such sweet sad images you write. Lovely. Nan |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love this write, Maureen.... sometimes memories mellow with age.  ~ many hugsLyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Awright ... one more thing before ah go, Maureen. You must -- you are REQUIRED to -- write a poem with "How can I miss you if you never leave" in it. That just rocks. Bye! back-me [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-24-2002 01:46 PM).] |
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