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Parisian Dream
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Parisian Dream |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Take me to Paris, let us go and step into another land of romance, beauty, stylish love together walking hand in hand. We'll sip cafe and eat croissants gazing toward the Eifel tower stroll in the moonlight happily cuddle amidst warm rain showers. The River Seine is glistening and ooh la la is not a dream As lovers form the cities glow while life is never as it seems. Let's drink champagne, the finest one and pretend love is truly real You have the power in your hands and all I want to do is feel. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! That sounds like fun! I was in France once but never made it up from the south coast so I missed Paris, always regretted that.. You have made this so alive with your wishes through settings! Good writing! I'll go break my piggy bank open and see if I have enough money to take you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
smiling at E's response...Cat..these are lovely moments you write about. If only... hugs M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too wish for this dream to come true for you! (kiss on cheek) May you find the love of your life soon and forever share every bella norte with him, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Thanks for the read. I really like this one I know Karate, Kung Fu, and 47 other dangerous words |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I hope to make it to this very romantic city of lights once more...the sooner the better...James |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so smooth, and nice. I loved the images, and especially the last two lines. Nan |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra....me thinks there is a full moon rising over the tower this eve.... A beautiful poem of a place where love is art and art is love.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ahh, you made me sit for a minute and just daydream of what could happen in Paris, and even if it didn't what a lovely dream. Cat, this was beautiful writing, as you held me in thought and kept me there. ~* Tell someone in your family that you love them today *~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Let's drink champagne, the finest one and pretend love is truly real You have the power in your hands and all I want to do is feel. Beautiful poem, sweetest dream...hold on to it tight. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Deep and sad and cool. I like the idea of stylish love, too.  She said burn ... together. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
let's go. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Let's drink champagne, the finest one and pretend love is truly real You have the power in your hands and all I want to do is feel. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sandra, loved this one... especially liked the last line! ..'all I want to do is feel.' I know exactly what you mean here... Wonderful way to express it. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
seems to me like you're feeling quite a bit, you romantic you. |
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