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Open Poetry #20

First Rose, repotted.

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-05-23 12:19 PM

First rose of spring, to thee I sing,
Thou art the jewel of nature’s bring,
Within thy petals secrets borne,
Protected by thy piercing thorn,
Beauteous bloom from heaven sent,
Perfuming with thy fragrant scent.
From frailest bud thy wonderous form,
Erupts in blaze to Helios’ warm,
Red velvet petals in satin bouquet
Gem of the gods on earthly display.
Thou art the breath of springtime dawn,
The splendor of angelic spawn,
God above on us bestows,
Perfection of springtime’s first rose.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2002-05-23 12:21 PM

ah yuh i liked this for its flowing rose

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-05-23 12:54 PM

enjoyed

CowgirlFreedom17
Member

since 2002-05-20

Posts 82
Mississippi

3 posted 2002-05-23 01:27 AM

Wonderful job. I can just picture a rose covered in morning dew, waiting to bloom in the sun. Great write.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-05-23 06:59 AM

I'm so glad when your garden
and your verse
bloom...

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2002-05-23 08:27 AM

Pretty bloomin' good it is....

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2002-05-23 10:16 AM

Tim

There is nothing prettier then a garden rose, unless it's your poetry.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-05-23 10:33 AM

Tim, this is beautiful!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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