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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
We lolled there Cool mossy stone our bed Having escaped our prison of clothes In an effort to escape late August heat You had turned your back Suddenly shy as you unhooked your bra And turned with crossed arms and a blush To face me Parting my lips teasingly as you kissed them Then crushed yourself against me When we hugged Neither of us made move to go further But sat side by side letting the cool mist From the falls slowly drench us in relief As it condensed on skin Then trickled in cool slide to find the places It felt most at home Perhaps it was your reaching out for me That caused the stir of rainbow reflections Dancing in shimmer around this place But with their stir the heat again touched me and I touched you |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Then trickled in cool slide to find the places It felt most at home We definitely have spring fever ha..loved that line especially ron..  ~Victoria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, both romance and passion paints your precious words! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...OH MY!!!... You would not believe the images dancing in my head at this moment! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I especially liked the last verse Cpat. I think shyness is attractive, it's part of the motion that makes the water fall!! Very Nice~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh...............................dang... you made me forget what I was going to say... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Lovely images in this...something about water and love that go so well together. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A glorious description of August heat... High on the sensuality scale. ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa! It's hot in here  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your ability to depict your visages through innuendo and imagery is a wondrous thing, Cap'n... I thoroughly enjoy each and every one of your works.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Capt Hair, You warmed me up pretty good. LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my.... oh my.... I'd just read Martie's Steamed Connections... now this. I'm officially calling in brainless today... my circuits have overheated. LOL [This message has been edited by suthern (04-12-2002 10:45 AM).] |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Mmm...what a scene. Soft and tender and full of sensuality. I loved it! Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rainbows rise... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sultry heat in here today...this southern gal is looking for, ? talcum...yeah..that's it! miss you much...you work too hard. *pout* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hey, if you're living a life like this, NO WONDER you don't have time to write. Sooo enjoyed. She said burn ... together. |
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