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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2002-04-11 03:30 PM



We lolled there
Cool mossy stone our bed
Having escaped our prison of clothes
In an effort to escape late August heat

You had turned your back
Suddenly shy as you unhooked your bra
And turned with crossed arms and a blush
To face me
Parting my lips teasingly as you kissed them
Then crushed yourself against me
When we hugged

Neither of us made move to go further
But sat side by side letting the cool mist
From the falls slowly drench us in relief
As it condensed on skin
Then trickled in cool slide to find the places
It felt most at home

Perhaps it was your reaching out for me
That caused the stir of rainbow reflections
Dancing in shimmer around this place
But with their stir
the heat again touched me
  and I touched you

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Victoria
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1 posted 2002-04-11 04:12 PM


Then trickled in cool slide to find the places
It felt most at home


We definitely have spring fever ha..loved that line especially ron..

              ~Victoria

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2 posted 2002-04-11 05:26 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, both romance and passion paints your precious words! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-11 08:24 PM


...OH MY!!!...
You would not believe the images dancing in my head at this moment!

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4 posted 2002-04-11 08:45 PM


I especially liked the last verse Cpat.
I think shyness is attractive,  it's part of the motion that makes the water fall!!  
Very Nice~

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5 posted 2002-04-11 11:14 PM



Oh...............................dang...
you made me forget what I was going to say...

Martie
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6 posted 2002-04-11 11:35 PM


Ron

Lovely images in this...something about water and love that go so well together.

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-04-11 11:49 PM


A glorious description of August heat...
High on the sensuality scale. ThisDiamond

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8 posted 2002-04-12 05:08 AM


whoa! It's hot in here
Nan
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9 posted 2002-04-12 08:04 AM


Your ability to depict your visages through innuendo and imagery is a wondrous thing, Cap'n... I thoroughly enjoy each and every one of your works..
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-04-12 08:20 AM


Capt Hair,
You warmed me up pretty good. LOL

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11 posted 2002-04-12 10:45 AM


Oh, my.... oh my....

I'd just read Martie's Steamed Connections... now this.

I'm officially calling in brainless today... my circuits have overheated. LOL

[This message has been edited by suthern (04-12-2002 10:45 AM).]

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12 posted 2002-04-12 11:23 AM



Mmm...what a scene.  Soft and tender and full of sensuality.  I loved it!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Sunshine
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13 posted 2002-05-21 09:38 AM



Rainbows rise...

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14 posted 2002-05-21 09:54 AM


sultry heat in here today...this southern gal is looking for, ? talcum...yeah..that's it!

miss you much...you work too hard. *pout*

vandana
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15 posted 2002-05-21 11:05 AM


enjoyed
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16 posted 2002-05-21 03:24 PM


Hey, if you're living a life like this, NO WONDER you don't have time to write.

Sooo enjoyed.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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