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For Whom You Write
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For Whom You Write |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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For Whom You Write It is for him, that intangible person You’ve not yet met, but he has Always circled the axis Of your thoughts. It is for him That you quill your deepest Secrets, your strongest desires, Whispering ancient secrets Not even known to you Before he embraced Your mind. He has always been there A faceless Presence in strong-armed dreams Of nighttime flights Ingenious personified, a Man strapped by grace and dignity Wrapped in silk cloak and Dark shadows But the unique thing being, he is every Man’s inner self, the one He cannot by design present in Public, but the one who lives In his heart and soul It is he, who bends in the wind, Who perseveres to triumph Over any obstacle. In gentleness, he soothes, By compassion, he argues for all rights For all people. Only his mind Can best his own attempts, So his will power is stronger. He is who he is. He visits my dreams. I write my soul for him. It is minor payment duly returned. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Okay, till I got to the last verse, I was saying….yeah, okay…can I meet him??? Lmao!! Just kidding Karilea. Beautifully penned for the one you love…whether he exists or not. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) And may your use always bring great cheer to your heart both in conscious and subconscious settings and have your heart smile forever in loves beauty! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This is awesome K>>> and universal too, huh...I mean, put HER in all those places and I'd call this'n my own...dream for which I write, at least some of which I write.... jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, I know this man!! Hey! You been looking in on my dreams?  LOLjustkidding! This is so true..yes, he is the one in my dreams, and the one of whom I write...Secret is out now. Loved this one and you KNOW it! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How interesting, Karilea...that you should say what I feel..but, not surprising. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Oh..yeah!..you write of woman truth..and dang you are really good at conveying that man..I really like how this one speaks to me. Sincerely, Reg |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An absolutely beautiful poem, Karilea.... It is he, who bends in the wind, Who perseveres to triumph Over any obstacle. I know this man well...and he does bend the wind! Thanks for writing so beautifully about him, Karilea  ~loving hugsLyra |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
i enjoyed this The man of few words... |
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CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi |
Wonderful!! It describes that person we want to be with and the person we want to be. The people we dream about in poetry from. I like it. Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
But the unique thing being, he is every Man’s inner self, the one He cannot by design present in Public, but the one who lives In his heart and soul It is he, who bends in the wind, Who perseveres to triumph Over any obstacle. Some women don't know him when they trip over him. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
"Some women don't know him when they trip over him." Now those are the truest words ever written. Lots of advise in this one dear friend. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice write, Perhaps I should mention, I have a black silk cloak. Gloom |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Can't be me, I don't get around that much! I do appreciate the sentiments of this piece! It could be someone like Shrek!! Keep giving these minor payments cause I love to read about them!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
BRAVO!!!! dear Karilea well penned. This is awesome, absolutely beautiful you talented poetess...well done ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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