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My Love for You
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My Love for You |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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My love for you has never waned its shadows cast on nightly walls enhanced by lighting of the stars that glint in hint of seeing all. My love for you has grown in time the words, each rambling like a rose of velvet thoughts that bloom from seeds whose fragrance leaves me scent-in-know. At times my heart stands still in want its pressures building cloaked in thought then all at once the beat explodes into a rhythm that can't be fought. At other times it rests in peace the darkside of you comforts then in tenderness that's sight unseen in petaled velvet feel, again. My love for you can never die it's bathed in you from day to day with fantasy and real combined my love for you has will to stay. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-22-2002 11:24 AM).] |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Will to stay... a nice wrap up to a lovely poem... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, SN...the will, is to me the power of the stay.. When I love someone, it never goes away... *s M |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
m, beautiful poetry of love and devotion... a true page from your heart and such a beautiful outlook...normally i don't pull certain stanzas from a poem... but this part here really grabbed me. thanks for such a wonderful read! much enjoyed... "of velvet thoughts that bloom from seeds whose fragrance leaves me scent-in-know" just awesome! take care. amy  "you can't stop |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Maureen, Ah love yr verses! She said burn ... together. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Maureen You just don't get enough replies for the quality of your writing! This is another gem! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Amy,thank you for noticing that particular line..I wasn't sure I should make up all those hyphenated words I do but they seem to blend my true feelings better than the normal descriptions I could use. Thank you again hugs M..oh and I subscribe to your signature words..*s hey Mike...thanks *s your days are numbered...counting down... M e..you know how to make me feel good, Thank you so much for such a nice reply. hugs M |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I know. And get this: there's been a snowstorm in Calgary. I wonder if I'll make it out alive? Much love to y', Maureen. She said burn ... together. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Maureen...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. I relate to these words well....I too am one who loves totally and deeply... Very beautiful thoughts.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey Mike. it should be easy for you to stand tall in a snowstorm...sure footed and all...and if you should be stranded, what more could you ask for *s love to you too Mike JamesM..thank you hugs M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Barry, you snuck in there.. oh so you noticed..yes it's a fault of mine  M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may this love always rest in your heart and bring a smile to your face forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
At other times it rests in peace the darkside of you comforts then in tenderness that's sight unseen in petaled velvet feel, again. I really loved this stanza..seems to be deeply delicate..and strong at the very same time..real love. Wonderful write. Sincerely, Reg |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
vandana, Noah..thank you and love always rests in my heart..it has nowhere else to go *s M Yes, "real love" words thank you Reg, for your response. *s M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-23-2002 10:40 AM).] |
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