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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-22 06:55 PM


The Pleasure
of A Kiss

I wonder is a three quarter moon just
as good to kiss under as a full one?

Yes you will always enjoy a kiss
if kissing the right set of lips.

Does romance do it's dance
with not a star in sight
or is it much more romantic
on a starlit night?

Stars...stars you say.
You can give me stars
or take them away
but romance will
always have its way.

If you close your eyes
when you kiss is it possible
some pleasure will be missed?

No pleasure will be missed
when kissing the right set
of lips.

JamesLee
May22
2002



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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-05-22 06:58 PM


And that's the TRUTH

*s

M

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-05-22 07:00 PM


JM....No argument with this one...well said!
powerofthysword
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3 posted 2002-05-22 08:22 PM


I like your straight to the point approach
in writing, it differs gretly from my very
heavily metaphored style. I enjoyed your
poem.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-05-22 08:42 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, and may you always kiss the pair of lips your heart desires and share true happiness forever and ever! (smiles) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-05-22 08:52 PM


James, I really don't believe it makes any difference if there are stars or a moon...
when it's the right set of lips.  
Enjoyed much!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2002-05-22 08:56 PM


Right on James!    Good write!!
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