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Sky Mad |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sky Mad the chimes played the wind something stirring in the air a moist kind of confusion wind disturbing dust in thought uneasy spaced turmoil flying above suddenly quiet no sound at all as constant temperature looses its center dropping fast selfishly pushing self-absorbed clouds to squeeze tighter causing commotion signaling attacking penetrating thunder hungry excited electricity flashes out of darkness making rage known silver bitterness dangling heavy without releasing any accomplishments but soon the force of anger finds its way into water sailing upon the wind in violence sky mad pouring force of wrath uncontrollable downpour assaulting without conscience or consequence dangerously furious yet unprovoked blinded to it’s destruction "The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche' |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Clever.... LOL Love it.... The water... the dust... Sky mad... wonderfull Lines... glad I'm not on your bad side : ) ~~ Connie ~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
was stormy like that here all last week..great descriptions (weather) of the sky or mood. *s Maureen |
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