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When Angels Fly
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When Angels Fly |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Out across my mid-of-night I felt an angel taking flight So softly in her fluttered wake She leaves a memory for my sake~ That's how it is with angelic winging They leave a song that just needs singing So it is with a tender sigh We harmonize a melodious goodbye~ Sometimes a memory humbles me Sending me urgently to my knees When an angel on her earthly roam says goodbye in sweetly sung song~ Just before she leaves my view she winks and says, 'I'll remember you' And I release one small tear moisturizing a remember of when she was here~ 'I'll come again to touch your sigh for that's how it is, when angels fly' ~For anyone and everyone who has ever felt the flutter of angels on the wing~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge...I think I felt one just now while reading this. Hugs! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul this is sooooooooo incredible beautiful. The touch of this is utterly amazing, I’m awe-struck by this wonderful piece. You know I love this don’t you. I can taste the wonder in this, I can smell the angel in the air, even hear an echo of the angel’s song. Utterly utterly perfect poetry, you never cease to amaze me with your skill and your way of writing is always a touch of heaven. As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Martie took my response! So, make that two! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, I love the little angel. And, the poem is just beautiful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Marge...James |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: A dear poem and I not only think I feel angels flutter, I also dream I am flying with them. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, NO ONE, yep...NO ONE writes of angels as delicately and beautifully as you... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Wow, I am new here and I can already tell you will be one of my favorites by the way you write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Marge, and I too have felt the flutter of angel wings....love this one. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"That's how it is with angelic winging They leave a song that just needs singing So it is with a tender sigh We harmonize a melodious goodbye~" I always wondered about that Marge.....but hey, you always have all the answers! A real nice feel to this one Marge...soothing!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
====================================== 'I'll come again to touch your sigh for that's how it is, when angels fly' ====================================== Oh Margie girl, touching poem, very inspiring and so beautiful...thanks so much for just being you, a most beautiful spirit ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl, You know I’m going to say this is Incredibly beautiful. Absolutely exquisite writing, I really do love your work, you are a writer of extraordinary skill, and this is fabulously wonderful. I do believe I feel the flutter of angel wings this really is so beautiful it reached right into me. Thank you for the gift of beauty in this write of angelic heart, you have surpassed yourself  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ You know that I know ... when we listen, we hear~  OhMarshaLove~ You sweet lady you ! I love the thought that you'd hear the echo of her songs~ Karilea~ You share thoughts with the nicest lady~ Thank you~ SweetSue~ Thanks sweet gal~ JamesMichael~ I appreciate your replies always~ BettyLou~ I have no doubt you soar with angels in your dreams sweet friend~ *hugs* Magnus~ Thank you dear fellow~ You always touch my heart~ VanDana~ Thanks so much sweet gal~ PowerOfThySword~ Thank you so very much. I know you will enjoy your stay in Passions circle of poets and friends. WELCOME~ Enchantress~ Yes, I can definitely believe you have. Thanks sweetie~ ETHome~ Thanks my friend~ Lord knows I don't have even half the answers, but I'm always listening for those angelic songs~ TracieHon~ It's so sweet to share with you. Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KrissyDear~ I must have been writing my responses to the previous replies when you posted yours~ Darling girl ... it's so good to see you and I thank you for your sincerity from the heart of my little bottom~  Love ya' *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Lovely! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*shaking head in awe* how do you do it? I love this! I'm glad it didn't slip out into the archives without me . |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Marge, All the poems you write are special...and some are very special and some are above very special...this is one of them.. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
You are so very talented, Miss Marge This is beautiful, as is everything you write. 'I'll come again to touch your sigh for that's how it is, when angels fly' Stunning. Really. ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you so much sweet friend~heart: Dixie~ Such a lovely thing to say ... thank you~ Dan~ Sending *hugs* of endearment for you my friend~  IceQueen~ I certainly thank you so much for the sweet reply~ Thank you for reading me~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This one fluttered right into my heart... it's a beauty, Marge... I'm so glad I didn't miss it! *S* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"I'll come again to touch your sigh" A wonderful poem with a wonderful finale..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernFriend~ Thank you so much honey~ I'm just awfully glad you didn't miss it too~ I know how you are about these sort of things~ Nan~ And you too my sweet friend~ BIG HUGS to both of you ... what a lovely *kiss* goodnight~ My e-mail server was under maintenance since last evening .... so if you've written me ... be patient .... I'll play catch up when they get the old server to Maryland and configure it to deliver the old mails~ I don't wanna grow up to be a 'techie'~  *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
moisturizing a remember ~~~~~~~~~ What a lovely and descriptive phrase. talk about painting a word picture... ~*~ your work humbles me you are the yardstick I use to measure against Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ If I had no other reply this day ... this one would caress me with a tender *hug* from you~ Thank you so very, very much~ I truly hope I always 'measure up'~ You are just soooooo easy to appreciate~ So, I will ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ You are missed .... come again to stay~ Thank you for the most beautiful compliment I could possibly be *gifted* with~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I'm glad I found this....it's so special when angels are on earth.  ~Elizabeth Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SkyShine~ Thank you so much for lifting a piece of my heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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