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CowgirlFreedom17
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0 posted 2002-05-22 03:57 PM



She was lost in the breathless night
Silver whispers rang in her ears
The molten galaxy
Stroming down a crimson victory
A glowing freedom
A glimmer of her destiny
The feathery breeze surrendered
Sweeping the diamond angel away from the painted creation
Her destination was the coral heavens

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

© Copyright 2002 Melissa Calvert - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-05-22 07:07 PM


Like this Cowgirl...James
powerofthysword
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2 posted 2002-05-22 07:49 PM


Wow, I am impressed at your creativity and
vivid descriptions. I will keep an eye on any
of your future writings.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-05-22 08:39 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love angel so so much, sweet friend, may every angel find a halo of a dream to hold true forever! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous celestial vision, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-26 10:50 AM


but how sad her owner would be when he woke up to see her gone..

nice images...i enjoyed...

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