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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-22 03:37 PM



Dance

let’s act
like raindrops
quivering
out of control
as they
dance across
hot asphalt
evaporating
together in
the heat

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-05-22 03:40 PM


Wow! That sounds like you're gonna need a seatbelt for that one.......he he a clever write...neat image!
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-22 03:49 PM


Count me in. Yr words are a dance of their own.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

3 posted 2002-05-22 04:09 PM


Nicely done. Brief. Vivid. Artistic. Thanks for sharing. Bob
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