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Kethry
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0 posted 2002-05-22 07:30 AM


The wind's in the right quarter
The bells hung in a fan
The incense is the only kind
To fertilize my plan

The rafters are all covered
Hung with the pipes of pan
And greenery grows everywhere
The length and breadth and span

I got all bases covered
Balanced my yin and yang
And everything is ready
To be starting off my clan

I've got my oil burners
They burn a passion flan
there -I think that's everything
What do you mean?  "I need a man"




Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


[This message has been edited by Kethry (05-22-2002 07:31 AM).]

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ethome
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1 posted 2002-05-22 07:33 AM


Can a guy get there without using the Japanese yen!!  Remember our picnic?? That's kind of an oriental approach isn't it?
I really enjoyed this Keth! Good write!

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-05-22 08:11 AM


ethome,
I do remember our picnic and if I remember correctly I was bringing the Whine you can see I did.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-05-22 08:34 AM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, my mom is really in the whole feng shui fascination, everyday she burns many different scented candles in the house and I swear now I have smelled everything! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, hope that works out well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-22 09:09 AM


Kethy, this is so cute...did you remember to have a turtle in the north east corner of your home?  No, it doesn't have to be real.
Love this!
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-05-22 09:14 AM


Keth,
You pulled my yin and rang my yang, enjoyed.

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6 posted 2002-05-22 09:50 AM


Keth darling sister of my heart and holder of my soul’s reason, this is utterly utterly delightful. You know I love it utterly brilliant.

Just a few questions though. What happened to all those boys I sent over to you? Didn’t any of them work? Well really darling you have a most distressing habit of working your way through them. They were all checked, they carried my seal of approval darling girl. If you were going to break them all you should have said you wanted the tougher variety. Now I’ll have to gather a few more, ho hum the things I do for you darling heart. Don't think I enjoy it darling heart, it is all work work work


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Toerag
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7 posted 2002-05-22 09:56 AM


Feng Sheui? Isn't that some kind of Martial Art form that involves moving stuff around your house at the right time etc?...Hmmm?, I've gotta black belt in Tongue Fu? Cute poem Ms. K
Sunshine
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8 posted 2002-05-22 10:03 AM



Kethry!  ROTF...I NEEDED this!

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9 posted 2002-05-22 10:11 AM


ROFL... I love this, Kethry!!! I didn't expect the ending at all... you wrote it perfectly! *G*
Zinsser
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10 posted 2002-05-22 10:41 AM


LOL   LOL  
too  cool
~~ Connie ~~

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11 posted 2002-05-22 03:12 PM


Ha ha ha ha! Loved that, Keth.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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12 posted 2002-05-22 04:15 PM


lol. . . done in your own unique style Keth. . .

great work. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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13 posted 2002-05-22 04:54 PM


heh.
-Dave

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14 posted 2002-05-22 06:20 PM


*s

You are so good at this
M

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15 posted 2002-05-22 07:20 PM


Keth...sounds like the moon is full and
waiting for a howl....

Nice write!

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16 posted 2002-05-23 05:19 PM


hehe, enjoyed very much.
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17 posted 2002-05-23 05:46 PM


LOL I loved it!!!!!

I know Karate, Kung Fu, and 47 other dangerous words

Krissy
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18 posted 2002-05-23 05:46 PM


Auntie Kethp this is exquisite writing the words flowing over the page with such ease. Why is it that you can write so very well my favourite aunt of heart? How do you manage to se the scene and show the place to perfection. I loved this one, it has your sense of fun running through it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy


And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Christopher
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19 posted 2002-05-23 05:49 PM


lol - had a feeling that was coming. very good.
Toerag
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20 posted 2002-05-23 05:54 PM


Chris...you had a feeling?...I'm going to be if she keeps writing this kinda stuff!!
JamesMichael
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21 posted 2002-05-23 06:07 PM


I think you can find that man at the supermarket...James
NewEnglandlazurlu
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22 posted 2002-05-23 06:08 PM


This is marvelous and so with the times! That you could even figure it out to write about it is an accomplishment.  :-)  LOL!!
Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

Christopher
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23 posted 2002-05-23 06:42 PM


ROFL! *rolling eyes* I didn't start it, i swear!
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Deep in the heart
24 posted 2002-05-29 03:50 PM


Well, having a man beats taking out the trash all by yourself, among other things.
Have you tried on a Texan for size?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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