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A Picture Through My Words
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A Picture Through My Words |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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If I were a talented artist I'd paint a picture just for you With all the colors of the rainbow And a boat made just for two We'd sail off into the sunset To the land of eternal love And we'd be guided throughout our journey On the wings of a beautiful white dove But this picture remains a fantasy As I'm unable to paint you see But I hope my humble words Will relay a message to you from me Through my words you'll feel pure emotion From the door of my heart to yours I'm not like an actor on the stage Who constantly yearns for your applause My words won't cost you any money They come from deep inside my soul And if they are able to touch your heart Then I've achieved the ultimate goal Suetang [This message has been edited by Suetang (05-21-2002 11:32 PM).] |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
sounds like a etopia, very nice thoughts I'm sure. Enjoyed thinking about it anyway  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, you really should take up painting... (kidding)...Seriously, your poetry always paints a pleasant vision...your heart shows the greatest love...and your words reflect great devotion too... one critical comment....change was to were... I think so anyway... [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-21-2002 08:58 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your words always take such beautiful pictures from the camera of poetry, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) may all these memories always fill your heart with joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Suetang, awesomely BEAUTIFUL! Dream away, Girl! You'll have that whether you can paint or not. Your heart is stronger then any picture. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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