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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-04-11 10:27 AM

Touch me
With the gentle stroke
Static charged on skin
Leaving tingling trails
From tips of fingers
To map the places you have been
Pointing to places you would go

Touch me
With feathered eye
Tickling mine until I laugh
At the anticipation of being reflected
For another day
Or another minute

Touch me
With rough housed smile
That shoves aside the bullying thoughts
Of being alone
And being lonely

Touch me
With soul soft kiss
So I can feel the tender
Of being loved

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-04-11 10:32 AM

Good morning, Ron

"Touch me
With rough housed smile
That shoves aside the bullying thoughts
Of being alone
And being lonely"

I love this "rough housed smile". The playfulness and the longing combined. Very well done, my friend! Hugs!

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2002-04-11 10:32 AM

read her response
trace her tears
she hears

but cannot touch
Captain...more...please....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-04-11 10:46 AM

Touch me
With the gentle stroke
Static charged on skin
Leaving tingling trails
From tips of fingers
To map the places you have been
Pointing to places you would go

Touch me
With feathered eye
Tickling mine until I laugh
At the anticipation of being reflected
For another day
Or another minute
================================

yes...tis all about the anticipation..
the wanting and needing to be touched is sometimes more than the touch itself...
the danger lies in having it...and then having to go back to needing it again.

Felt the many different tingles in this Capt...

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-04-11 10:47 AM

WOWWEEEE...love it when you write like this ron..nicely penned..hugs

~Victoria

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-04-11 10:59 AM

All of this, and especially the last stanza, hit me hard.
I know the feeling, very well.
Great poem, Ron.
Sandra

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-04-11 12:49 PM

WOW!!! OHMYGAWD!! WOW!!
I'm, um, speechless...
Going back to read this one again...
and again...
and again...
again.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-04-11 01:08 PM

Consider yourself touched ...

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