Open Poetry #20 |
The Sigh That I Heard Yesterday |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The Sigh That I Heard Yesterday Extraordinary thing happened of the sigh I heard just yesterday people stopped and people listened they heard the sigh too, they say, they conjectured, oh they wondered if something had happened to you they looked about askance and inquiries ‘round about flew to see if there was anything that they could do for you and had you known or perchance had felt that in their minds your sigh had dwelt you would have known of their concern for you so do not think you dwell without for care and interest is all about so when next you sigh, give kind thought in realizing the love you've brought. ~*~ 3 August 2000 reposted for a friend |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh, how I want to know if they did more than notice or ponder, more than care in their hearts... for the one who sighed would not have to be told then, that they did, for s/he would know by the love they showed Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling girl this is Utterly utterly fabulous writing darling heart, I love it. This is so beautiful, the words trickling over the page like water flows over the beach. Absolutely excellent writing, I am awed by this wonder. It is absolutely fabulous. I could feel the sigh and the love swelling up, covering the heart with wonder Outstanding writing darling girl outstanding Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this makes the heart smile |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, this does make the heart smile... and a great big sigh within the mind... Did you hear it? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Heart Sighs!... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Awwww There is nothing sweeter than knowing you are loved and thought about. Lovely... ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine sighs are something special that seep out when we least expect it enjoyed this |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just...beautiful all the way round *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is sooooooo beautifully upbeat, sweet friend, I too always sigh just daydreaming of my love Joanna and all my other friends here and that makes me feel so happy inside and I am reminded by how fortunate and lucky I really am! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this made me sigh! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
...Sigh!... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thanks for the tender repost |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Sunshine... what a tender reminder that friends listen... even to what we don't say. *S* |
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