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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we make the dance water when we sing with our eyes the touch songs we make the tree winds when our fingers entwine like hand hold feathers I reach to your soul pockets where you carry treasure you make me look long there and I avoid where I know it is so my touch will last longer than you can stand I show you your heaven piece when it is found and beg you to hide it again in front of my eyes slowly ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The closest thing I can come up with in typing to compare to the sound I just made as I read your closing lines...is "oooh." Trust me. "oooh" doesn't even come close... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, lost in their eyes, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssss) Your words always sing from all the senses and emotions of the heart, sweet friend, this is a true keeper I know your love will always enjoy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-21-2002 08:35 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are a number of adjectives, but all are held in silent abeyance... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*silently nodding in understanding here* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You make love into art, as it should be. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
your thought touch, an invisible brand applied to the senses... painless yet swollen with intent. Indigo |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad yr haunting these pages again, DS. It's cold without yr verse sometimes. She said burn ... together. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene...thank you lady..nice to see you speechless? grin noah, thanks my friend it is fun to read your comments Sunshine Good Morning ms sun lady, thank you for the read Enchantress, bless your smile and your eyes, slow hugs to you ms martie, thanks lady friend for the soft touch whisper Indigo, pleasure is a woman that walks slowly by and waits just long enough to be seen smiling, thanks babe BSQ humble thanks my friend |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I show you your heaven piece when it is found and beg you to hide it again in front of my eyes slowly This is touch with all of the senses..enjoyed. Sincerely, Reg |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy this is utterly beautiful stunningly well written, you know for certain that etched into my soul are the words Dark. No one paints word pictures with your consummate skill, nobody does it like you. I love the way you layer the scene, build it into a masterpiece, truly exquisite darling boy. You know I’m going to say I love this utterly don’t you? And of course you know I’m smiling brightly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina, thanks babe for the wave wiggle you are sweet slivers of southern ms marsha, you amaze me with your reads and comments, such gracious offering of warm, thanks to you babe |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Or: Heaven: Peace: Find? Smooth. Cor |
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