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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-04-11 10:09 AM

Sometimes sun baked
Cracks form as I dry negated
In the heat of your words

No Spring refresh of shower
Replenishing

Edges crumble
As your step of stare
Walks across my mind
Leaving dust behind my eyes
That clouds in billows
What I thought was sky

Little grows
In drought felt hearts
But sometimes sun baked
The cracks do.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2002-04-11 10:11 AM

Reveling in the imagery...
keep teaching...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-04-11 10:12 AM

Capt Hair,
True, clever, enjoyed.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-04-11 10:14 AM

"Little grows
In drought felt hearts
But sometimes sun baked
The cracks do."

.....wow.....
left the image of a dry shriveled up heart....

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

4 posted 2002-05-03 10:41 PM

...step of stare...

up, or down
either way
a pleasing read

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-05-04 12:10 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Ron, I have beared this kind of heart for so very long so I know how it feels, just as right now I'm yearning for the rain to fall and end this drought in Colorado! (sigh) This is very powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

6 posted 2002-05-04 08:41 AM

CatHair~ What an awesome use of metaphor...

"Little grows
In drought felt hearts
But sometimes sun baked
The cracks do."

That's sooooo sad

Cry those tears
let down the rain
fill the cracks with water
wash out all that pain

I enjoyed reading, even though the images made me sad!

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

7 posted 2002-05-04 11:56 AM

beautiful.....well done

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