Open Poetry #20 |
You Passionate Poets (even your titles inspire… giggle) |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
You Passionate Poets (even your titles inspire… giggle) today as I read your titles I thought this sounds like a poem and it sure was with a little re-arranging hope you enjoy…. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ just a moment just a simple Sunday in the beginning once upon a time ago… the unthinkable place living on the edge someday is finally here someday…again out of nowhere back again hammer of time tapping the window opening the door new here a better point of view escape so many questions the mystery of life sorting through drifting how many times have I… a need to believe in love the sailing leaf falling into the bend of flight following the wind the consequence of drifting ebb and flow lost in a dream silent promises… anticipation paradise awaits… love awaits… look to the sea sea of love horizons where my spirit roams life- first circling, then spiraling-like a river off the stones of ocean’s bed if life were for a second a flutter of enchantment promise me lover’s tool my life, you’re welcome to it unchained comforting to know wind blow waiting for you it is you only you gather my spirit hold my hand… learning to believe when you’re near in poetry muse of the heart the breath of imagination a meeting of the unknown paper thoughts paper dreams catching poetry a page or two from my heart silently aloud in unison words mean so much of moonlit kisses midnight’s curl moonlight dreams a moment written in the stars dance of colours I dance the twinkling stars don’t hide away come undone silence moon velvet scratches traces with fingertips… whisperings of heart singing a song the bottom line song of joy two souls together sunset of poetic phrase and then came the dawn night folds we are day love touches softly a letter to the rain soft rain let me have your rain drink water from my lips essence of sense peace with you a place of warmth and comfort you gave me new life heart’s home three words Thank you to all the poets listed as titles were used : sea, mysteria, sunshine, cocobaci, nakdthoughts, sunnyone, larry c, nakdthoughts, mysteria, serenity, christopher, greeneyes, martie, raz, larry c, greeneyes, casanova, muys, nakdthoughts, jamesbowie, magnus, jamesmichael, sven, martie, smittenkitten, christopher, seymour tabin, ctowen & greeneyes, interloper, christopher, interloper, interloper, christopher, hopes, severn, walker, sudhir lyer, saunni, magnus, elizabeth santos, inspiredpoetwriter, titia geertman, poet devine, magicmystery, bill charles, logan, smartchick, nakdthoughts, cocobaci, zinsser, doreen peri, jamesbowie, bill charles, vas, seymour tabin, lucky, nakdthoughts, marge tindal, melissa honeybee, martie, amister, doreen peri, hopes, jamesmichael, marge tindal, moonlight romeo, mistletoe angel, mystic mystron, serenity, wayoutwalt, kevin, soleil noir, serenity, decaflame, sea, marsha, silver streak, elizabeth santos, kethry, marsha, auguste, gentle spirit, martie, dark stranger, elizabeth santos, bsquirrel, jamesbowie, bsquirrel, raz, krissy, rosepetals25, bsquirrel, suetang, suetang, rosepetals25, rosepetals25, [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (05-02-2002 10:13 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very creative and well done. ThisDiamond |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ That's hard work and you did one heck of a job with it~ Thanks gal~ Delightful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, Aren't you just a clever girl. Fun...and pleased to make the list. Nice job and lots of work. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Helen~ Wow! I can't believe you came up with this beautiful poem out of such a constricting concept! I love it! And I never would have noticed that you used one of my titles had you not mentioned it because this poem just flows so smoothly that it didn't stick out very very cool poetess. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, you always make such magic come alive with the beautiful words you write! (kiss on cheek) I was delighted reading this entire poem based on all of Passions poets titles, sweet friend, this is fantastic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Helen, a lot of work went into this...thank you for including mine as well. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Now that's a neat trick. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And that lots of poetry...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see my name included among a fine ensemble...and sometimes, the title says it all...this took a bit of work, and it is apparent, you had a lot of fun! Thank you for this! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Helen~ very humbled to be among your talent......thank you...this is very beatuiful the way you composed all the poets....hugsss Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into an ocean of you, what if I told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-03-2002 08:38 AM).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
cute - i've thought about doing this with my own poetry before - but never just off the page itself. and you've made me wonder when the last tiem was that i had four poems on the first page of open forums... it's been a while you can bet! Christopher |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well now, you have done a superb job |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Very good work. There's actually a name for this kind of a poem. It's called a cento, and you've made it your own. Well done. Thank you What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . a cento. . . I've been reading about these. . . I like it helen. . . great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, This is clever. You must have a ton of patience. ENJOYED THIS MUCH! LiZ PS Even the peot pen name's inspire, you slick lady you! [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (05-03-2002 05:37 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is amazing Helen!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
extremely creative! I have often read the titles too, and thought of different things, but never something like what you've come up with here! Wonderful! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you worked hard on this and the payoff shows... nice job |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Ever neat!!!! and ya did manage to fit all our titles together sooooo flawlessly.... It even made sense. What a sweetheart you are. Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, as I read, it sounded so poetic, and I like it when moments like this happen and we see it and you've captured it beautifully! It really does flow, very cool. And thank you for including me in there |
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